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Poem written for and submitted “Love or Bust” poetry contest, Karen Jones, sponsor, January 28, 2026.

Premiere Contest WinnerFORTY-THREE AUTUMNS

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At dawn, your fingers still trace the curve of my spine like they're reading braille~ each scar, each shift in the landscape, a sentence you know by heart. You laugh when I steal the blanket, when my knees find the hollows behind yours, an old map drawn without compass or reason. Our fights are old books now, their spines cracked open to the same dog-eared pages~ we know the lines by heart, but recite them softer these days. We are two trees grown into each other’s bark, gnarled and weathered-together, no longer remembering which rings belong to whom. Some loves are built like this~ not with grand gestures, but with the quiet tyranny of your coffee cup left warming on my nightstand, the way you hum off-key in the shower, still, after all these years, and I pretend not to hear it, and you pretend not to know. Forty-three autumns, and your hands smell like sawdust and onions, and I wouldn’t trade our slow unraveling for anything~ not even the taut, bright thread we once were.
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Leiser Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 11:46 AM
Love the construction and deep meaning of your poem, Sara! A well deserved win! Congrats! :)
Jones Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 12:09 PM
Sara congrats on your first place win in my contest! Your poem was touching and a beautiful example of true love! Thanks for your patience in judging!
Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 7:35 AM
There is a warm tenderness here that is most charming ~
Hind Avatar
January 29, 2026 at 5:50 PM
This is so moving, and the way marriage should be. Beautiful!!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 28, 2026 at 5:32 AM
Love this! Yes, living life together! Congrats on your many years! Love the pic!
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