Forty Words of Fatherly Advice

From father to father, here's some friendly advice
Offer love and support, be wise and concise
Responses are remembered and magnified in young eyes
Think before you speak is most highly advised
Yesterday is gone, and be willing to compromise  



   by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 31, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Daniel, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Nice little gem.
Turner Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Experience comes in handy, Thank you.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Wonderful write Daniel ..Congrats on big win!!
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 1:35 AM
Thank you, Ma'am, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It was such an honor to win.
Simpson Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Good advice Daniel, Congrats
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Thank you, Carlene. It is indeed an honor. I appreciate your flowers.
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 12:11 PM
DANIEL, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Thank you, SKAT. It's a tremendous honor.
Selfa Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations Daniel on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Thank you for the flowers, and thank you for taking the time to read and comment. It is definitely an honor.
Garg Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:16 AM
Back to congratulate you on your great win.
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Thank you, Archana. I am honored and humbled.
Johnson Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Well dispensed advice and great win. Love, Joyce
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Joyce. It's a very humbling experience. I was just trying to have fun. Thank you for stopping by.
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Wisdom from a father to a father.. well done, and congratulations to you, Daniel.
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so much. It's very humbling to me. I love being a dad though.
Gentry Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Excellent acrostic and inspiration. Clever. Congratulations.
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Thank you very much. I've had lots of support from the people over here. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:44 PM
Great father to father advice, Daniel. Congrats on your 2nd Place win. Sandra
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thank you, Sandra. I didn't even know the contest was over until you just now told me. Thanks for the flowers.
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Very clever acrostic and wise words indeed Daniel congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your kind words.
Murray Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Willingness to compromise was sadly lacking in Irish fathers years ago. Thankfully men here now not only push buggies but also listen to what youth has to say. Well done Daniel.
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 4:12 PM
After three kids, one tends to learn. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Wonderful gem, a gift without end.
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you for the pretty flowers.
Konos Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:16 AM
Oh Lah Lah....You hit that nail on the head...Congrats...excellent....Made me miss my dad.....
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Thank you,Judy. I miss my kids.
Garg Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:56 AM
wonderfully knit Acrostic. Really impressive.
Turner Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thank you, Archana, I appreciate the flowers. You have a pretty name.
Rigoler Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 4:30 AM
I counted and, yes, there are exactly 40 words to this poem besides the wisdom therein. Thank you for stopping by, Daniel. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
Turner Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Thank you, sir. Always an honor to have you stop by. I do so enjoy reading your words of humor and wisdom.
Muzzey Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Nice Acrostic Daniel, best to you in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Thank you for the kind words.
Nunez Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Very wise advise, Daniel. Best wishes!
Turner Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Thank you ,Ms. Kim, I've had a little experience with that.
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