Forty Seven

At sixty you've spent twenty years in bed
And two years of eating when your fifty
I've stopped counting the grey hairs on my head
My skin is loose and everything's squishy

My spine's compressing, causing me to shrink
The birthmark on my face, now on my neck
Crows feet are one thing, I've got spiders feet
One thing after another, I expect

Do I qualify for seniors rebate ?
Clerk asks at the store who looks about ten
Forty seven, do I look sixty eight ?
I cannot handle that happening often

I'm ok with the aging endeavour
I feel as though I've been here forever

August 22, 2016
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Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Creative way to go with the contest..Thanks for participating..Congrats on your placement..Sara
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Cute and funny.
Kimathi Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Congrats Tanis, for your placement with this funny piece!! ;-)
Scars Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 8:24 PM
Tanis! lol very funny sonnet! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Janko Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Dear Tanis, a very cute poem on the aging process. I used to get by looking ten years younger than my sister (we are only one year apart), and now they ask if I am her mother! But I am alive so I don't care, so I usually say "No I am her grandmother", then they think I look great! Betty
Makama Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 10:50 AM
This is nice and absolutely beautiful. I love every it of this piece of yours and I am happy reading from the creativity of your wonderful mind after a long period of time.
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