Forty Rusty Pennies

I found forty rusty pennies in a black leather slipper
while my itchy nose sneezed more than three times;
why were they hidden from thrifty mother?
Weren't they less valued than silver dimes?


While my itchy nose sneezed more than three times,
mom woke up to scold me for my loud laughter;
she was mad and wanted to hear anything but lies
and frantically screaming, she pulled my curly hair. 


Mom woke to scold me for my loud laughter,
I tripped on the slipper, falling flat as a bear, 
and frantically screaming, she pulled my curly hair;
with an angered face, I retrieved to my dark lair.


She was mad and wanted to hear anything but lies,
mom woke up to scold me for my loud laughter;
with an angered face, I retrieved to my dark lair...
I found forty rusty pennies in a black leather slipper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:32 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 4:47 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Poet Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Congrats on your win with this great Pantoum Andrew!Love this.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 1:39 AM
pennies in a slipper, that's a new one ha ha .Congratulations Andrew, well done and a well deserved win xx
Culverhouse Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 6:55 AM
having a funny poem marathon this morning.
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