Fortune Teller



               "Go ahead, make yourself comfortable, 
        contemplate, whisper secrets to momma moon,
        let me read you and we will phase out this bad 
                     luck you been having, real soon.
      Momma's confidence, anonymously
reflected in the night sky,
moonlighting from her day job,
as performance muse, child.
Honey, there's a reason, why.
Her stars, like diamonds, strewn across a velvet counting tray.
Been cheated upon by every skguy.
I "been around the block honey",
seen a few things, especially that Gaia wouldn't want repeated, about
orbits and tractor beams.
Her waves crashing like a heart pounding with desire,
pulling men deeper into her depths,
like a siren, especially with sailors embarking 
her Bermuda triangle, circle of fire."

'Don't get me started on the Swiss Alps. 
Oh no, let's not go there!"

         "In her baptism of salty tears 
         and resolute surrender, uhh uhh!
      is an ever-changing batter of emotions, my dear,
   beneath the layers of society's masks, 
 stratas straddling a variety of contexts, 
Lodges, secrets.
     Mmm hmmm. Karma Sutra. 
That's where we could be goin next!"
Relations, ships, tides, so complex.

               "But let's talk about you, inside you
            lies a battlefield of emotions,
          awful powerful voodoo,
       where vulnerability dances with strength, 
    but she chooses to go volcanic and blow her stack!
 Oh, sorry, we were supposed to be talking about you, 
                        honey child, let's get back on track.
   You see, I guess with her holding it in,
                what can you expect.
      It is in the broken that we can find beauty, though,
 igniting strength in the depths of vulnerability."

        To Be Continued, Baby!

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Date: 1/2/2024 11:07:00 AM
Your poem is a skilful blend of imagery, conversation, and introspection, creating a rich and engaging piece that resonates with the reader on both a personal and universal level. The use of language and the dynamic flow contribute to the poem's charm, making it an enjoyable and thought-provoking read.. Going to read the conclusion dude..
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Jude Herrick
Date: 1/2/2024 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One.
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