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poem submitted to "Fortuitious" poetry contest, Rob Carmack, sponsor, 4/12/2026

FORTUITOUS FIREFLY

I followed a firefly  
that winked at me like it knew a secret  
and drifted toward the crooked woods.  

A mossy path unrolled itself,  
inviting my hesitant footsteps  
as if it had been waiting all along.  

At the clearing’s heart,  
a tiny door glimmered in a tree~  
and when I knocked, it opened.  

Some luck arrives wearing magic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Delegans Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 8:43 PM
I love poems with strong bookends! The opening with the firefly winking hooked me. The closing of luck arrives wearing magic gave me something to walk away remembering. Great poem, Sara.
DiMino Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 4:11 AM
Indeed, miracles are not explainable, yet they do occur in each and everyone of our lives. Taken for granted. Not wanting to believe in the miraculous nature of some things. Love between two human beings is a perfect example. It has no logical foundation...all about feelings.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:56 AM
I love fireflies. Indeed there is magic within them.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:25 PM
I agree...they're just so enchanting to watch. wishing you well
Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:39 PM
weird....I never read this before now, I was also writing of fireflies!! a huge coincidence lol. yours is beautiful
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:24 PM
that is a weird coincidence. I'll have to read your firefly poem. wishing you the best
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 6:34 PM
As Line said. Yes, charming is the word.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:24 PM
many thanks, Andrea.
Sands Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 6:00 PM
Very sweet and creative. Well written Sara :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:23 PM
awww, thank you Heidi for your kind words
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 4:36 PM
absolutely charming ~ magical
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:23 PM
many thanks, dear Line.
Terry Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 3:38 PM
It sounds like your firefly had been waiting for you! I love the imagery with the mossy path, too.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 1:23 PM
awww, thanks Angela for your visit and kind comments. wishing you well
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