FORTRESS THAT OFFERS REST

Inside fortress* that offers rest my weary soul breathes out blest sigh lulled to slumber midst noisy pest while to the Saviour I draw nigh My heart welcomes music of hope inside fortress that offers rest as misty eyes serenely cope with guitar strums reaching love’s crest. Etching my mind with winning zest Word of God prods me to fight pain inside fortress that offers rest smiting doubt’s cajole --- by faith’s gain. Now, I’ll soar for triumphant flight since revived, warmed in prayer nest as lilacs waft courageous plight inside fortress that offers rest.
*Psalms 18:2 The LORD is my rock, and my fortress, and my deliverer; my God, my strength, in whom I will trust; my buckler, and the horn of my salvation, and my high tower. August 17, 2024 1st place, "Eight Words 2" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 8/27/2024

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Date: 9/2/2024 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creative talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/28/2024 4:54:00 AM
congratulations dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 8/27/2024 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata. Talking with the Lord, refreshes you and gives you peace. Blessings.
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Date: 8/27/2024 7:34:00 AM
Wonderful write Beata, Congrats on your win
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