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Fortress

Chattering room Unkempt and loud A pit of gloom Amidst the crowd You sat alone Your head unbowed As though I've known Within my core You claimed the throne And thus before The twilight's fall I deeply swore To scale the wall That guards your heart To free you once And for all

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Date: 12/31/2024 1:32:00 PM
Love that love never gives up... go get um... :) Well done. Ann
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I.A. Ryd
Date: 12/31/2024 4:44:00 PM
Thanks Ann
Date: 12/30/2024 9:02:00 PM
You have quite a way with words and with tempo. Superior penning, methinks.
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I.A. Ryd
Date: 12/31/2024 4:42:00 PM
Thanks a million Gershon

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