Fortitude Ye Old Hero

I eat upon a creaky table
   and think in quiet realms,
   sleep I will on some luminous cloud,
   wonder where the seam of my labors
   stitched what I have found;
I oft muse aloud the folly of the world,
   yet dismiss the blemish of my brow,
   the sin remains.....
The drear of the mystery is an old enemy
   when death comes round;
I will try to smile then,
   when he knocks with thunderclap,
   make not fortitude a stranger,
   perch life on its ruby throne;
As compared to my Creator ----
   I am but a wee thing,
   a wisp of smoke.....
   a wave at its end come tide,
   an echo in the breach of time;
The little rain-drops my eye does weep,
   and sleep in moody seas,
I bleed a greater good,
   if justice should have me;
   to live a little longer.....
   with wherewithal and ponder,
Drink thy Immortal Elixir ----
   to feel love's strong arms
   and bathe in its allure;
Not ails and old age ----
   where strength of youth does fade,
   but the sweet of aged wines ----
   some wise child wild with first rays of life,
Yet, alas ----
   will I try?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Duncan Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 12:08 AM
I like this very much. Very well done Poet. Thanks for coming to read my Belladonna :)
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:40 PM
I think this was one of the first poems I ever added to my favorite list. In re-reading it today, it still belongs there. This is really excellent. "I bleed a greater good, if justice should have me; to live a little longer....." That line is particularly moving to me.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Thanks for the comment and kind visit, I was always fond of this piece Keith;-)
Lindley Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 12:34 AM
I never fail to enjoy your writes! You never fail in delivering my friend. Straight into my fav goes this gem and A7...
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:15 AM
Love how you expressed your thoughts on life and with reference to the creator, Keith. #7 // Thank you for commenting on my poem "Love is Free". All the best. // paul
Onclaud Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 4:20 PM
soulful write with such tender lines.. much enjoyed , keith.. nice to see you on my page.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 2:13 AM
- A wonderful write, I like it a lot Keith !!! - I wish you a great day and a relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Holmes Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 6:12 PM
I liked your word play Keith...Peter
Grahamburglar Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Beautiful. I'm going to favorite this.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Many thanks Preston! Glad you enjoyed:-) Keith:-)
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