Fortitude

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Fortitude Foundation of fierce stone, forging life on its own. Fortissimo strong heart, fights for its every part. Force but with strength of mind, fiber finer than wine, from firmest on the vine. 9/23/16 https://www.howmanysyllables.com/poem_syllable_counter_workshop/index 42 syllables in all 7 lines

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2016 3:17:00 PM

great metaphor with the vine line!! I see it's a winner. Congratulations.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/27/2016 3:32:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/27/2016 2:27:00 PM

Powerful words that depict fortitude. Congrats on your win, Janis! Love, Kim

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/29/2016 10:40:00 AM

I'm going to be busy spending a few days with my grandkids and then I'm off to spend a month with my mom. I'll be back mid-November and then I'll sponsor the "G" contest.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/27/2016 3:33:00 PM

Great contest. What about G?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great wins poems, Janis !!! - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/27/2016 1:52:00 PM

I enjoy the form. Could go all the way to the letter Z. Try it next time. Good luck. Blessings, Janis.