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Forthwith On the Wings of Dreams

in the absence of complication, trials and tribulations become distant memories. above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes - inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind. ambiguity of thoughts once grounded forthwith on the wings of dreams ascend beyond the constrains of life fronting fate in the expansion of hope whispers of darkness no longer fall as secrets silenced by a rise of dawn they passably regain meaning anew as lips tremble in a longed for first kiss feathered touches brush against flesh bodies arc together in pulsating rhythms becoming seductive silhouettes of a timeless love whereas shadows are no longer mirages on walls seconds no longer seem eternal through resounding echoes of time as hours become countless spans on wings soaring in the absence of complications November 16,2019

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Chris Green

Date: 12/2/2019 7:15:00 AM

Congratulations my friend on your placement in this contest. I believe it was that third stanza that pushed this to the top, the entire poem was beautiful but that stanza has found a place in my heart.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2019 3:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/1/2019 9:00:00 PM

Love the 4th stanza! Congratulations, Sandra!

John Hamilton

Date: 12/1/2019 7:17:00 PM

Congrats Sandy on another great win!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 7:20:00 PM

Thank you John...i wrote this one when i was feeling pretty emotional...i was disappointed with it for awhile and almost deleted it, guess i should just not second guess sometimes ... hugs :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/1/2019 5:28:00 PM

Hi Sandra, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 6:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis...have a great evening :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/1/2019 4:18:00 PM

Back with congrats my friend on your well deserved podium win.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 5:08:00 PM

Thank you my friend.. :) hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/1/2019 4:02:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 5:08:00 PM

Thank you... hugs

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/1/2019 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Sandra :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 3:47:00 PM

Thank you Heidi... hugs

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2019 3:30:00 PM

a very very deep take in the contest... also quite different to the other entries... love the third and fourth stanza.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/1/2019 3:47:00 PM

thank you.. i was stuck in the depth's of my own life's complications...your verse offered me a rope to dream my way out of the darkness that was looming... many deep and dark poems written around this one...

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/18/2019 11:59:00 PM

This is beautiful, Sandra! Your style compliments well with Silent One. I tried to set down a few scribbles to compliment the poem and I got stuck with writer's block. You did an excellent job!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/22/2019 10:12:00 PM

thank you so much my friend....hugs....writer's block is no fun :(

Chris Green

Date: 11/18/2019 7:41:00 AM

Absolutely amazing, You have taken the verse provided and given it a new and wonderful meaning. If life were only free of complications we could all live within the lines of this mesmerizing dream found in your beautiful poem. Best wishes in the contest my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/18/2019 9:48:00 AM

Thank you my friend...we all have complications in life and we often dream of what life would be like without them, i say dreams are the foundation of life, even if we never reach our destination, we still live in the dreams somewhat.... hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/17/2019 6:14:00 AM

Love this, sweet lady. You're sure to win. I simply love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/17/2019 7:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina, it appears he has drawn many good writes with his contest...i think it will be hard to judge... hugs and happy Sunday :)

Hello There

Date: 11/16/2019 9:45:00 PM

Soaring in their absence... a beautiful dream ~ love this :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/17/2019 7:43:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.... hugs :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/16/2019 9:01:00 PM

This is gorgeous Sandra! I bet Silent will love it. My muse has been on hiatus, but I am finally back enjoying poetry again. Have a great weekend! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 9:09:00 PM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend...i can't wait to go and read your poem....i hate when muses take a vacation but glad you are both back, you have been missed... hugs XoXo... enjoy your weekend as well my friend!

Johnson Vdev

Date: 11/16/2019 8:00:00 PM

Oh ...a nice read with deep implications .....some abstract but sure images truly touch the reader ...keep on writing , you do have a charm to put forward in colourful words and images. Tks

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 8:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind comment.... :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/16/2019 7:24:00 PM

trials and tribulations become distant memories... I needed this one. A lovely write. Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 7:31:00 PM

you can thank Silent one for that... the first verse is his for a contest to add on his poem... glad you saw it though my friend! hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/16/2019 5:40:00 PM

Your poetry soars dear Sandra, gl in the contest,

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 5:45:00 PM

thank you for such a kind comment Pixie... hugs :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/16/2019 3:33:00 PM

well done dear poet, great ending stanza...good luck

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 3:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Frederic... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/16/2019 2:31:00 PM

Splendidly done my friend--very apt write for the contest theme--moving beyond past..the essence of your poem in these lines: ambiguity of thoughts once grounded forthwith on the wings of dreams ascend beyond the constrains of life. Lovely write, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:40:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend...i just got finished reading his example for the contest and it left me doubting my own write, your words helped feed me a little hope... thank you for that Vijay... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/16/2019 1:50:00 PM

- A wonderful poem, Sandra - I especially like the 4 verse ... - A winning poem in my eyes ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise...it came fairly easy this morning... hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 11/16/2019 1:27:00 PM

This is another masterpiece sandy, so many exquisite lines, too many to mention, I think...this is another winner!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much John, i always value your opinion on my poetry...i know you often understand the depths within... hugs :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/16/2019 1:09:00 PM

In the absence of complications I wouldn't be here today..."whereas shadows are no longer mirages on walls" I like this line...

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Arturo...sometimes life keeps us grounded, it's always filled with hurdles... hugs! enjoy your weekend my friend :)

Na Na

Date: 11/16/2019 11:11:00 AM

Very well put. You have a good chance in the contest. Thanks for sharing this Sandra. Best of luck

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:09:00 PM

Thank you so very much Greg :) hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/16/2019 10:57:00 AM

WoW! Sandra, This is good entry for the contest. I enjoyed the message contained in this well written write. I will you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind and uplifting comment Alexis... have a great weekend... hugs :)