Forsaken Temptation

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"(Two roads) diverged in a yellow wood and I choose the one less traveled by and that has made all the difference.” Quote by - Robert Frost
Forsaken Temptation
I saw two signposts when out walking one day One said “Paradise” and the other “Please Stay” Should I walk with hope toward my envision would that be making a wrongful decision. Pathway to paradise in my mind foreseen Enthralling flowers and trees, bridges o’er streams Bright rainbow and bluebirds adorning the sky A scene once narrated in a lullaby. The ‘Please Stay’ signpost tugged upon my heartstrings Bringing back memories of all kinds of things Some of them golden, some coming with regret A combination of the life I have lead. I had a dream of what paradise would be Somewhere all who dwelled there did so contently Where hallowed love's the alluring incitement The surroundings an enchanting enticement. Soon came time to sort the complex of my mind Was my lifestyle something I could leave behind Standing with tears slivering down from my eyes I solemnly asked the Lord to be my guide. The decision I made was that I must stay Where I was needed by each night and each day All it took was some divine mediation My salvation was forsaken temptation. *+*+*

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Date: 6/13/2023 1:36:00 PM
I like the message you convey in this insightful poem. BIG congrats on your win, Belle.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/12/2023 7:21:00 AM
A belated thank you Vijay, appreciated ~ Belle
Date: 6/12/2023 5:57:00 AM
Belle, lovely, and thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge , congratulations, you made the right decision !
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/12/2023 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Constance, belated though this is, I enjoyed writing for your contest… Belle
Date: 6/11/2023 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Belle
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/12/2023 7:20:00 AM
A belated reply to you Alfonso, with a big thank you… Belle
Date: 6/11/2023 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "Forsaken Temptation" write/picture. A wonderful ending. I also wrote on this one. Have blessed day/week...........
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/12/2023 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Paula, though I’m late replying to you. Blessings, Belle
Date: 6/11/2023 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful Belle. A fave for me because of the wise advice here. God Bless, JB
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/12/2023 7:15:00 AM
A belated thank you Judy, God bless you too… Belle
Date: 6/4/2023 2:27:00 AM
Death brings fear, no doubt about it. But reason urges you to go to a better place.
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Date: 6/4/2023 2:02:00 AM
Sometimes it's damned if you do damned if you don't but they say everything happens for a reason. Hope you're enjoying our lovely weather Belle. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/12/2023 2:49:00 AM
A belated thank you Tom, hope you are recovering well from your recent operation… Belle
Date: 6/4/2023 12:36:00 AM
this is very subtle, who really knows what to do ? enjoyed alot yann
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/4/2023 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Yann, we just have to pray and hope for the best. I’m pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle
Date: 6/3/2023 10:37:00 PM
Love this poem Belle….deep and worded just beautifully! Big decision to make! Debx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/4/2023 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Deb, life does bring along big decisions to make, it’s to be hoped we don’t make big mistakes… Belle x
Date: 6/3/2023 7:47:00 PM
Your words hold great depth and resonance, offering profound wisdom. If only we could fully embrace these ideals, it would transform the world into a better place. The final stanza beautifully captures the essence of this message. Is it wrong to walk toward your vision with hope? In my mind, I see a pathway to paradise. Well Done
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/4/2023 1:25:00 AM
Thank you Sotto, I truly do appreciate your review… Belle
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