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Forsaken Temptation

"(Two roads) diverged in a yellow wood and I choose the one less traveled by and that has made all the difference.” Quote by - Robert Frost
Forsaken Temptation
I saw two signposts when out walking one day One said “Paradise” and the other “Please Stay” Should I walk with hope toward my envision would that be making a wrongful decision. Pathway to paradise in my mind foreseen Enthralling flowers and trees, bridges o’er streams Bright rainbow and bluebirds adorning the sky A scene once narrated in a lullaby. The ‘Please Stay’ signpost tugged upon my heartstrings Bringing back memories of all kinds of things Some of them golden, some coming with regret A combination of the life I have lead. I had a dream of what paradise would be Somewhere all who dwelled there did so contently Where hallowed love's the alluring incitement The surroundings an enchanting enticement. Soon came time to sort the complex of my mind Was my lifestyle something I could leave behind Standing with tears slivering down from my eyes I solemnly asked the Lord to be my guide. The decision I made was that I must stay Where I was needed by each night and each day All it took was some divine mediation My salvation was forsaken temptation. *+*+*
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Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 1:36 PM
I like the message you convey in this insightful poem. BIG congrats on your win, Belle.
Edmonds  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:21 AM
A belated thank you Vijay, appreciated ~ Belle
La France Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Belle, lovely, and thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge , congratulations, you made the right decision !
Edmonds  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Thank you Constance, belated though this is, I enjoyed writing for your contest… Belle
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Belle
Edmonds  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:20 AM
A belated reply to you Alfonso, with a big thank you… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "Forsaken Temptation" write/picture. A wonderful ending. I also wrote on this one. Have blessed day/week...........
Edmonds  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Paula, though I’m late replying to you. Blessings, Belle
Ball Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Beautiful Belle. A fave for me because of the wise advice here. God Bless, JB
Edmonds  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:15 AM
A belated thank you Judy, God bless you too… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 2:27 AM
Death brings fear, no doubt about it. But reason urges you to go to a better place.
Cunningham Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 2:02 AM
Sometimes it's damned if you do damned if you don't but they say everything happens for a reason. Hope you're enjoying our lovely weather Belle. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 2:49 AM
A belated thank you Tom, hope you are recovering well from your recent operation… Belle
Rolland Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 12:36 AM
this is very subtle, who really knows what to do ? enjoyed alot yann
Edmonds  Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 1:28 AM
Thank you Yann, we just have to pray and hope for the best. I’m pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle
M  Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 10:37 PM
Love this poem Belle….deep and worded just beautifully! Big decision to make! Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 1:27 AM
Thank you Deb, life does bring along big decisions to make, it’s to be hoped we don’t make big mistakes… Belle x
Poet Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 7:47 PM
Your words hold great depth and resonance, offering profound wisdom. If only we could fully embrace these ideals, it would transform the world into a better place. The final stanza beautifully captures the essence of this message. Is it wrong to walk toward your vision with hope? In my mind, I see a pathway to paradise. Well Done
Edmonds  Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 1:25 AM
Thank you Sotto, I truly do appreciate your review… Belle
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