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Forsaken Ll

I am restored, nothing more to break. Even through my division, nothing more to move. As I rise, through the ashes, this whole world must fade. For these are the words i cry. I will take back, all that is mine. My passion will be my bond, no more will I live in flesh. I will be forever faithful, with no more fear. No more wasted days, and I will not be forsaken.

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Wilma Neels

Date: 1/1/2012 12:26:00 PM

A feeling of reassurance in this gem John, really enjoyed this tonight :) thank you for your comment on my side as well :) Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/26/2011 2:50:00 PM

Wonderful write my friend... I must flip through your pages and read more... Michael

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/24/2011 8:00:00 PM

Good wording in this fine entry. Have the happiest of holidays. Bob

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/21/2011 3:20:00 PM

It is wonderful when I can see the deeper meaning in someone's poem and what you touch on speaks to me in that deeper sense. You always prod lightly with strong message and that is a gift John - have a wonder filled Christmas and inspiration filled New Year dear friend. Love, Elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2011 12:00:00 AM

Dear John, first i must ask how are you? Good I hope.... about your poem: I love the powerful thought, and WILL of words. You have a very graceful way to precept life and its future... Forsaken is for the weak... had to read this one 5 times.... truly enjoyed,..p.d.

Red Fiery

Date: 12/19/2011 10:26:00 AM

No more I will be in flesh....so strong ! Stay strong with ur great poetry John...u have always been an amazing friend..!

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/19/2011 7:56:00 AM

Your declaration comes thru strong and with conviction. God Bless you in the year to come. Great write!

Cory Long

Date: 12/18/2011 8:43:00 PM

i will take back all that is mine.. is a very powerful phrase nicely done. Merry christmas. cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2011 10:47:00 PM

Very interesting one, john. Makes me thing of heaven!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/16/2011 6:22:00 PM

Howdy, JA....I like the spirit of resolution at the beginning of your poem...then you narrow your focus to reclaim your prize...tunnel vision is a powerful weapon in battle..so many get distracted and lose their focus only to be weakened for the fight. No more wasted days....YOU will NOT be FORSAKEN! I say Roses and Sparking grape juice for her tonite!! lol. Much enjoyed this victorious write!

Lisa Cooper

Date: 12/16/2011 5:50:00 PM

First I have to say thank you so much for your lovely comments on my work, and to this piece of art I say bravo!

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/16/2011 1:39:00 PM

Some very strong words here John.Yes, faith will overpower fears.And when we are done wasting away our days in the flesh.All thats left is heaven.And faith and love will take you there.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2011 11:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today John Aaron. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/16/2011 9:26:00 AM

Won't it be wonderful when the flesh with all its weakness is done away with. The spirit body will indeed, never waste days. So beautifully you bring these truths in such gentle ways. I alway feel like I'm being led by your words instead of pushed. Hugs to you John and I'm so grateful for your encouragement. Love, Elizabeth