Forlorn Alien, Invader

Alien, invader
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The green shadow sits on my terrace of slanting night, 
a night, which has escaped the tortuous alleys of unalleviating city. 

The shadowy invader, the alien, the lonesome foreign body 
watches the clusters of bright sparkles and trails, 
in oiled rhythm, of mechanical creatures. 
It comes to its mind 
whether 
human are like their machines too.  

A soft wind rises from Ganges; 
a blind bat becomes alert of the alien presence; 
the fire on the dumping ground hisses.

It is different landscape.
Theirs is more barren.
Still, the alien likes its planet 
and to the creature we are also aliens.

The green shadow sits on my terrace, every slanting night, 
seeing us with a soft distance, seeking dispassionate resemblance, 
not quite understanding, through the glass of a reverse telescope.
~© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Poddar Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 9:39 AM
I am truly honoured
Adeite Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 7:58 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
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June 15, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Congrats Kushal on the featuring of "Forlorn, alien Invader." Vince
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kushal. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
June 14, 2009 at 10:11 PM
Kushal - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ
Guzzi Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 6:23 AM
powerful vision like a horror fantasy very Lovecraft. Light & Love
Cantu Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 9:20 PM
Wow, nice images, and the whole idea rocks; it reminded me somehow to that movie, mmmm Signs? We call it Señales, but nevermind; the idea of them observing us as the outsiders, the uncommon creatures, the alines....makes us wonder about their reaction and ours; thanks a lot for the experience, and for the comment =)
Poe Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 8:07 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! Look forward to more of your poetry. -Alley
Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 7:41 PM
awesome write. beautiful.
Poddar Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 7:15 PM
Thank you Crystal
Lambert Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 11:44 AM
WOW.....!!! great write Kushal......!! I love this.....Keep It up!! Keep smiling..,KEEP WRITING....!! > Crystal from Sri Lanka
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