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Forlorn Alien, Invader

Alien, invader ---------------------- The green shadow sits on my terrace of slanting night, a night, which has escaped the tortuous alleys of unalleviating city. The shadowy invader, the alien, the lonesome foreign body watches the clusters of bright sparkles and trails, in oiled rhythm, of mechanical creatures. It comes to its mind whether human are like their machines too. A soft wind rises from Ganges; a blind bat becomes alert of the alien presence; the fire on the dumping ground hisses. It is different landscape. Theirs is more barren. Still, the alien likes its planet and to the creature we are also aliens. The green shadow sits on my terrace, every slanting night, seeing us with a soft distance, seeking dispassionate resemblance, not quite understanding, through the glass of a reverse telescope. ~© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar.

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Date: 6/15/2009 9:39:00 AM
I am truly honoured
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:58:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:17:00 AM
Congrats Kushal on the featuring of "Forlorn, alien Invader." Vince
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Date: 6/15/2009 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kushal. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2009 10:11:00 PM
Kushal - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/8/2009 6:23:00 AM
powerful vision like a horror fantasy very Lovecraft. Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:20:00 PM
Wow, nice images, and the whole idea rocks; it reminded me somehow to that movie, mmmm Signs? We call it Señales, but nevermind; the idea of them observing us as the outsiders, the uncommon creatures, the alines....makes us wonder about their reaction and ours; thanks a lot for the experience, and for the comment =)
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Date: 6/6/2009 8:07:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! Look forward to more of your poetry. -Alley
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:41:00 PM
awesome write. beautiful.
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Crystal
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Date: 6/6/2009 11:44:00 AM
WOW.....!!! great write Kushal......!! I love this.....Keep It up!! Keep smiling..,KEEP WRITING....!! > Crystal from Sri Lanka
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