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10.11.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Forlorn -


    alone
    all gone
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Maverick Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 7:31 AM
Or maybe its an early bird.? Waiting for The others.?
Proxenos Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 10:14 PM
Alone - choice or shunned. YOUR WORDS GIVE FOOD FOR THOUGHT DEAR SUNSHINE SMILE. Your wonderful poetry is always inspirational Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:07 PM
Sad, and yet maybe it was his choice, needs a little breather and a bit of alone time :)
Beaufort Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 4:47 PM
Anne-Lise, a very interesting combination of letters. Remarkable and makes me stop and admire. Smiles!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 6:30 AM
Pretty cool with pic. We usually see the crows lined up. Left alone by choice, before the bird joins the rest, etc… Many thought with a footle and pic! Hugs
Gentile Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 4:02 AM
Anne-Lise, so much said with so little! Stark and wonderful! Happy Thursday xxoo
Messina Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:12 AM
Truely sad, Anne-Lise. I suppose even birds have feelings too! Great entry....best wishes in the contest. Hugs :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 1:50 AM
Dear Anne-Lise. Short but to the point.
Hind Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 9:03 PM
I like this along with the picture! Sad though
Daniels Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 2:36 AM
Short & sweetly sad. I like it. Xxx.
George Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Nicely scripted footle and an image so apt to illustrate the loneliness. All the Best. Hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:49 PM
well done...perfect single footle! best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Hello Sunshine smile, That bird is lonely. The bird is all by itself. Hugs. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Your "lonely" write and picture are sad. You have told a story here. He needs a friend. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Hugs... Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Cute and somehow sad!
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