Forks and Shoelaces

Old age has changed the nature of my chores
replacing doorstops – holding open doors
or when the joy of shopping slowly flags
I stand with other men – just holding bags

We dine – I weigh the cost of cold French fries
and order well done burgers – children’s size
for something’s gone awry within the loop
that schedules when and where I’ll have to poop.

It seems I live a life somehow gone placid
along with once taut muscles now gone flaccid 
Yet still I fight the battle – break the rules
for still I feed myself – tie my own shoes.

So if you’re young and strutting through your prime
please, take a hint and cherish all such time
while your on the quest for more and more
take heed for age has a trap door.


John G. Lawless
©10/15/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/27/2019 8:38:00 AM
A young man may find it entertaining but an old one will see the wisdom between the lines dear, John! Believe me, age has taught me the lessons!
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Date: 11/25/2019 11:35:00 AM
This was funny, though I know what you mean so maybe not that funny. : ) Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 11/25/2019 10:16:00 AM
Hi John. This was good. and its very true. Thanks for sharing
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John Lawless
Date: 11/25/2019 2:57:00 PM
just having some fun at my own expense for a change.
Date: 11/25/2019 8:56:00 AM
I giggled the whole way through, thank you. A fave. xomo!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/25/2019 2:56:00 PM
Oh yeah.....laugh at the travails of those staving off the onslaught of being put out to pasture.....
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