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FORGOTTEN THOUGHTS

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In the attic of the mind, where dust is made of whispers, I found a book whose spine had never cracked~ its pages stiff with sleep, its ink still dreaming. Chapter One began with half a sentence, trailing off like train smoke in the wind. Chapter Two was just a stain of coffee, a ghost of something bitter, almost sweet. And there, between the lines I couldn’t read, my fingers brushed a footnote, soft as moth wings: This is where you left the words you meant to say. I held it up—the whole thing sighed apart, scattering syllables like startled sparrows.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 25, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Powerful opening line. Wow ~ great final line with alliteration. Beautiful overall imagery ~
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2026 at 4:20 AM
This aging of the mind(brain) can bring some terrible changes which are not pleasant like sighing blowing everything apart. Thanks for sharing this creative work with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara K
George Avatar
February 22, 2026 at 12:54 AM
Such arresting and mind blowing imagery. Sara, you are such a talented poetess..... "the whole thing sighed apart. Scattering syllables like startled sparrows"--- I can feel it all.
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