Forgotten Star

In her days of glory  she was a Movie  Star
A symbol of beauty,  even from afar
Winning a couple of Academy Awards
Her fame and fortune were in the Cards

But the years had crept upon her  face
Now wrinkled by time's inevitable  embrace
She had gotten  weak  and could not stand
Without being given a helping hand

Now she's tucked away in some obscure place
Faded are her beauty and grace
Her memories now are often scarred
She had now become a forgotten Star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 7/22/2012 10:31:00 PM
maycongratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
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Date: 7/20/2012 11:16:00 AM
Hey, this is a great way to do that contest and I see you are on the winners' list. Congratulations, my friend!!
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Date: 7/18/2012 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2012 2:00:00 AM
It's sad how fame can turn into a faded memory. Congrats on your win Joseph!
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Date: 7/17/2012 8:15:00 PM
congrats Joseph on a fabulous write and win luv.. amazing words to share ..
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:45:00 PM
Congrats, Joe. Sad and touching. Great job. Kudos. Ralph
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Joseph May
Date: 7/17/2012 7:48:00 PM
thanks Ralph
Date: 7/17/2012 12:15:00 PM
Joseph congrats on your win..David
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Joseph May
Date: 7/17/2012 7:48:00 PM
thanks David
Date: 7/17/2012 9:09:00 AM
Once the bloom is off the rose... congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Joseph May
Date: 7/17/2012 7:46:00 PM
thanks Joyce
Date: 7/17/2012 7:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win...it is sad when our idols grow old..just like us. BG
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Joseph May
Date: 7/17/2012 7:43:00 PM
thaks Barbara
Date: 7/17/2012 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your #3 win in my contest! how heartbreaking to be this star - I like how you said "tucked away", showing it's not by her choice, and memories "scarred" because it's a bitter pill to swallow after such adoration :)
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Joseph May
Date: 7/17/2012 7:43:00 PM
thank you Susan...I am glad I was able to place in your contest...after the fame comes the stark realities of life when They are weak and feeble...
Date: 7/16/2012 11:31:00 AM
A sad write for sure,,Joseph!Wishing you well!! Mikki
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Date: 7/15/2012 12:27:00 PM
A sad write Joseph you have captured the theme perfectly.. :) Wilma
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Date: 7/12/2012 3:27:00 PM
Very touching... very nice! Terry
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Date: 7/11/2012 11:51:00 AM
It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Joseph. Thank you for letting me know I did a boo boo on my poem. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the inspirational garden that you may continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2012 2:47:00 PM
Well done, so sad for the forgotten greats! :) Tanya
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Joseph May
Date: 7/10/2012 7:03:00 PM
thank you Tanya...yes fame is a fleeting thing
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