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Forgotten Soul

This lonely heart The only heart to ever hurt this way I’m all alone My God is gone So every day I pray I loved myself, I did I hid from all my present problems To die, would simply set me free So throw me to the lava And let me burn as Satan yearns To accept me into Hell And my day of death was Gods request You’re a waste I heard him yell So fall I will As my body chills Die at an age so young From me God hid Our God he did For I am not his Son And now I learned But now I’ll burn That is the fate for me I lived in Sin so now I’m condemned For Eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 3:54:00 AM
- Hello Sean :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:43:00 PM
Sean, Nice to see you on Silent One's winning list. Congratulations on your win. --SKAT
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Date: 10/16/2015 1:58:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this exquisite write Sean!
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Date: 10/15/2015 11:34:00 AM
Sean, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:53:00 PM
Sean, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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