Forgotten Path

I walk down a forgotten path
not one who wishes to come and pass
I walk down this forgotten path
theres blood that glistens on the snowy grass
I walk down this forgotten path
with creatures so fierce no one could last
I walk down this forgotten path
and see a girl with a gruesome past
like me
she made this journey
only to become 
part of the forgotten path
not one who wishes to come and pass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Benson Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Hmm...Some people and things can be easily forgotten, may be caused by character or an inherited disgrace. Nice poem, Gatchell.
Gatchell Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 8:43 AM
thank you i appreciate the feedback
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