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Forgotten Path

I walk down a forgotten path not one who wishes to come and pass I walk down this forgotten path theres blood that glistens on the snowy grass I walk down this forgotten path with creatures so fierce no one could last I walk down this forgotten path and see a girl with a gruesome past like me she made this journey only to become part of the forgotten path not one who wishes to come and pass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2011 9:18:00 AM
Hmm...Some people and things can be easily forgotten, may be caused by character or an inherited disgrace. Nice poem, Gatchell.
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Ky Gatchell
Date: 6/28/2011 8:43:00 AM
thank you i appreciate the feedback

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