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Forgotten Path

Forgotten Path


Life I’ve left behind
Still waits for promises lost
Loyal to the end


…for Raul’s “still life” contest

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Sue Mason

May 2, 2010 at 12:09 PM

Like the play on "still life" with this excellent write. There is always time to begin ... smile

Debbie Guzzi

April 28, 2010 at 4:47 PM

why are you blushing???? was the goose your spirit animal? Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

April 23, 2010 at 12:00 PM

Great write that should do well in the comtest.Keep the creative pen flowing.Good luck. Sara

James Fraser

April 23, 2010 at 8:14 AM

Sad but kool title James, wonderful Senyru - good luck in the contest >> James

Debbie Guzzi

April 23, 2010 at 6:03 AM

You keep throwing boomarag's "welcome to my world!" hey 2 boomerag's kinda make the tai Chi symbol! Light & Love

Farah Chamma

April 22, 2010 at 2:09 PM

For some reason, its title reminded me of Robert Frost. Great Senryu. Good luck. farah

Debbie Guzzi

April 22, 2010 at 9:33 AM

well of course it's GOOD you are always a good read & write BUT I would like it if you were happier and go find a new someone to appreciate your loyalty & kindness! Light & Love