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Forgotten Old Headstones

A lattice of vines covers this resting place
Some headstones fallen, lying in the grass, 
That I drift back into hedges of   t i m e, 
Where markers seem to hum life’s stories. 
 
This quiet glade, an archive on a ridge, 
keeps secrets untold where stones are marked~ 
As a cloak of vines protects all those gone by
remembered   not    by any living heart.
 
I wonder if those reposed could share their tales
Before crumbling away as nameless dust;
Their sorrowful mysteries so hidden
Entwined now,   with the vines’ languishing blooms.
  
To leave this place ~  where silent souls abide
Is to be aware of my unknown days,
For when, in dimming light, inscriptions crack
Will I be forgotten,    like these old headstones?



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Overgrown With Vines Contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings   10/3/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Nette, beautifully penned and touching. CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
Inman Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Again a great write Nette.
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Oh Nette- you will NEVER be forgotten! loved this poem lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
May Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Great write Nette...Congrats on your win
Vaso Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Come lay a flower at my side, how could I have missed this, loved this one!
Inman Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 7:15 AM
A beautifully touching write Nette. Many years ago I managed a one hour photo lab and it was amazing how many people brought in photos of cemeteries and headstones. I loved your line, "This quiet glade, an archive on a ridge."
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 3:39 PM
I remember reading this wonderful poem Nette, and commenting on it, but I don't see my comment anywhere. Anyway please know how much I enjoyed this moving piece. ; ) 7
Trifiatis Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:43 AM
With such a poetic talent difficult would be to be forgotten dear, nette! A seven!
Turner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Forsaken in life, forgotten in death. I think we would all like to be remembered by someone because vanity is a human trait we all share. A sad poetic write, nette.
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 5:32 AM
Poetical lines fearless before the 'hedges of time' ... What else we may seek ?
Lalion Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Signed and delivered with profound metaphors on the cycle of life - death.
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