Forgotten Old Headstones

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A lattice of vines covers this resting place
Some headstones fallen, lying in the grass, 
That I drift back into hedges of   t i m e, 
Where markers seem to hum life’s stories. 
 
This quiet glade, an archive on a ridge, 
keeps secrets untold where stones are marked~ 
As a cloak of vines protects all those gone by
remembered   not    by any living heart.
 
I wonder if those reposed could share their tales
Before crumbling away as nameless dust;
Their sorrowful mysteries so hidden
Entwined now,   with the vines’ languishing blooms.
  
To leave this place ~  where silent souls abide
Is to be aware of my unknown days,
For when, in dimming light, inscriptions crack
Will I be forgotten,    like these old headstones?



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Overgrown With Vines Contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings   10/3/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/9/2016 4:06:00 PM
Nette, beautifully penned and touching. CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:39:00 AM
Again a great write Nette.
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:21:00 AM
Oh Nette- you will NEVER be forgotten! loved this poem lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/8/2016 2:44:00 PM
Great write Nette...Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/5/2016 11:41:00 PM
Come lay a flower at my side, how could I have missed this, loved this one!
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:15:00 AM
A beautifully touching write Nette. Many years ago I managed a one hour photo lab and it was amazing how many people brought in photos of cemeteries and headstones. I loved your line, "This quiet glade, an archive on a ridge."
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:39:00 PM
I remember reading this wonderful poem Nette, and commenting on it, but I don't see my comment anywhere. Anyway please know how much I enjoyed this moving piece. ; ) 7
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Date: 10/3/2016 10:43:00 AM
With such a poetic talent difficult would be to be forgotten dear, nette! A seven!
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Date: 10/3/2016 10:18:00 AM
Forsaken in life, forgotten in death. I think we would all like to be remembered by someone because vanity is a human trait we all share. A sad poetic write, nette.
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Date: 10/3/2016 5:32:00 AM
Poetical lines fearless before the 'hedges of time' ... What else we may seek ?
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:30:00 AM
Signed and delivered with profound metaphors on the cycle of life - death.
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