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Forgotten Hero

I got on the bus And sat on the front seat. With bifocals, The man sitting next to me Greeted me with a Smile And said, “Good Morning”. On the way, Sitting by the window And being bewitched by the black moon's shadow His words ‘stunned my soul. “An executive of the state Demanded me a letter from the camp "If I need the pension" "If I need the pension." His words broke my heart For me, no more vision A great dedication In the mission, But not the passion or fashion Though only a call from his office To bring a letter “He enjoys my traveling Far away from the city. “I wish I could see your face, But I am so sorry, My world is black”. I got off the bus, But the thoughts of mine Blow like a wind. Men have no gratitude To a man of yesterday. For me, that great soldier Is a Man of everyday. Oct. 8, 2020 Will To Survive Poetry Contest Contest Sponser : Silent One

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Date: 10/17/2020 12:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, L.K. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/17/2020 7:45:00 PM
Dear Sunshine Smile, Thank you very much
Date: 10/15/2020 7:44:00 PM
Poignant stark truth! Amazing write, congrats!
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/15/2020 8:57:00 PM
Dear Unseeking Seeker, appreciate your comments and thank you very much for the wishes
Date: 10/15/2020 2:36:00 PM
Beautifully penned an an emotional write LK. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/15/2020 8:58:00 PM
Dear Linda Fowler, Thank you very much for the comments and wishes
Date: 10/15/2020 12:53:00 PM
Loving Kindness, your exceptional poem is meaningful and moving. Your last stanza is an emotive grand finale to a great piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/15/2020 1:44:00 PM
Dear Susan Ashley,Thank you very much for your kind wishes and great comments
Date: 10/15/2020 12:33:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you on your Top Win in the contest!!
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/15/2020 1:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for your wishes
Date: 10/15/2020 12:15:00 PM
At the time of commenting, I did not realise it was for my contest... Yes these people are forgotten, because government use them as pawns to fight for their own imperialistic needs... Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/15/2020 1:47:00 PM
Dear Silent One,Thank you very much again for your wishes and thank you very much for your great comments
Date: 10/8/2020 3:35:00 PM
This is an excellent write!! I like the title, the narrative flow and unity of thought!! Wish you Good Luck at the contest!
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/8/2020 6:50:00 PM
Newton Arach, Thank you very much
Date: 10/8/2020 10:17:00 AM
Great poem... Nice name
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Loving Kindness
Date: 10/8/2020 6:49:00 PM
Dear Silent One,Thank you very much

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