Forgotten Grave

jackcongratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Jack. Love, Carol

well, hey, here is one I sure missed seeing. Awesome job. Congrats in the contest, Jack!

congrats Jack on a super second place win luv with this fine write and entry...

I had to take a break from those steamy collabs of our fellow poets, Jack..Wow...I don't think I could ever write one of those, have YOU?...This poem reminds me of the the many trips I took to the cemetery by my childhood home...so many forgotten graves..Your question at the end is wonderfully poetic and the worn name is eerie! Great work AS ALWAYS! Gwendolen

Congrats, Jack. Excellent. Sad. Well deserved win. Kudos. Ralph

Jack, congrats on your win..David

Dear Jack This sure is a lonely picture. love, Kathy

Every one is forgotten in just one or two generations. Sad but true. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

so true, TOO true..and yet eventually the fate of all! EXCELLENT writing! 7 Light & Love Congrad's on your win.

This sounds weird, but I love to visit cemeteries and wonder about those names and try to put faces with them. I like your poem very much..congrats.

Congratulations on your winning poem.

Congratulations on your #2 win in my contest! Fantastic imagery in such a short piece - speaks volumes :)

Hi Jack, good luck in the contest... good night..pd

Many a time I've spent in these places meditating in the serenity of those who gave gone before me. Your poem is a vivid reminder that all that was is now past and can never be retrieved. Bravo for for this!

wow Jack.. u presented a scene so many graveyards tell a tale of with neglected to,bss..best wishes luv..

Happy weekend to you Jack and the best to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Forgotten souls. I've seen graves like this. You say so much in so few words! :) Tanya

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..It is sad to see a grave that has been neglected a very long time but sometimes families die and sometimes the ancestors don't know about the grave..Great topic chosen and great presentation...Sara

This is a fabulous write Jack! You've done wondrously on this poem my friend! I just love your descriptions, the word "eroded" planted a special image into my mind of what this grave would look like! Great Work!!