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A squirrel scurries down the slope Gathering sunflowers, full of hope This is my backyard, young and alive Into the green carpet, I dive The grass is coated, wet with dew Tickling my toes as I enjoy the view Sweet, soft and subtle scent Whiff from the sunflowers when you bend As the day draws its curtain close Night falls and starts its show The birds' last notes echo and fade away Crickets chirp and sunflowers sway Flaunt their golden, shiny petals The wind makes the leaves rustle At last, the sunflowers bow their heads As children are snugly settled in their beds Taste, the fresh air of the past, Now, only stale and vast The sunflowers have wilted and withered The wicked weeds have fought and conquered A squirrel scurries down the slope, Escaping from weeds, in fear, it gropes, This is my backyard, deserted and desolate, Silently trembling, awaiting its fate - The squirrel trips, tumbles and falls Flat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/8/2013 8:43:00 AM
Priscilla, ,,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *
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Priscilla Lewis
Date: 8/8/2013 9:07:00 AM
Hi :) Real nice to meet u :) do u mind checking out my other poem "Darkest Day" too? Thanks! I really appreciate your kind feedback!
Date: 8/8/2013 2:53:00 AM
Hello new member Priscilla !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2013 12:14:00 AM
awe, poor squirrel, great story, Priscilla... enjoyed -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@...
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Priscilla Lewis
Date: 8/8/2013 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Linda :) Where can I find the contest? What is it about? I'm real keen on trying out some simple poetry contests :) but I'm not sure if I'm gd enough, heh.

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