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A squirrel scurries down the slope
Gathering sunflowers, full of hope
This is my backyard, young and alive
Into the green carpet, I dive

The grass is coated, wet with dew
Tickling my toes as I enjoy the view
Sweet, soft and subtle scent
Whiff from the sunflowers when you bend

As the day draws its curtain close
Night falls and starts its show
The birds' last notes echo and fade away
Crickets chirp and sunflowers sway

Flaunt their golden, shiny petals
The wind makes the leaves rustle
At last, the sunflowers bow their heads
As children are snugly settled in their beds

Taste, the fresh air of the past,
Now, only stale and vast
The sunflowers have wilted and withered
The wicked weeds have fought and conquered

A squirrel scurries down the slope,
Escaping from weeds, in fear, it gropes,
This is my backyard, deserted and desolate,
Silently trembling, awaiting its fate -
The squirrel trips, tumbles and falls
Flat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/8/2013 8:43:00 AM
Priscilla, ,,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *
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Priscilla Lewis
Date: 8/8/2013 9:07:00 AM
Hi :) Real nice to meet u :) do u mind checking out my other poem "Darkest Day" too? Thanks! I really appreciate your kind feedback!
Date: 8/8/2013 2:53:00 AM
Hello new member Priscilla !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2013 12:14:00 AM
awe, poor squirrel, great story, Priscilla... enjoyed -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@...
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Priscilla Lewis
Date: 8/8/2013 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Linda :) Where can I find the contest? What is it about? I'm real keen on trying out some simple poetry contests :) but I'm not sure if I'm gd enough, heh.

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