Forgotten

Minutes turn into hours and hours turn into days,there is still no sign of you how did it end up this way, one day your here and the next your gone, i love when were together but hate when you leave me alone, if i expressed how i feel about you it would be a love song, but your not here to see me cry, cause when you leave i feel like a part of me has died, so here i sit alone and ask myself 'why do i love you so much that i cant let go' time and time again i blame myself your like a drug your bad for my health but still i wish you were here to hold me close and wipe away my tears, whispering sweet nothings to me and saying there's nothing to fear but those days turned into months and months turned into years, now my joy and pain turned into worries and fear you said you were going to come back if not now then when cause were promise is getting old and i feel forgotten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/6/2010 9:20:00 AM
powerful peace
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Date: 11/5/2010 9:53:00 AM
THIS WAS A BOLD POEM I LIKES THIS
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Date: 11/4/2010 8:32:00 PM
OK I gotta comment on this one. This is original, fresh and is excatly what it says it is. Love it
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