Forgotten

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July 15, 2024

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forgotten era An ornate machine From past unfolding Fondest memories keeping close to heart

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/15/2024 4:01:00 PM

Hello Mala, that phone in the photo is an antique. A beautiful antique. Love 7 Friendship /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2024 10:07:00 AM

Hello Mala, I will read it. yet i do like this poem Mala. I hope he enjoyed this poem. Friendship and Love, /Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2024 4:08:00 PM

Dear Darlene, I wrote this poem by mistake - thought Joseph was asking for five syllables in each line. So, I did not delete this one, but wrote another one “Forgotten Era” in the correct format. You may like that one better - yes, this is a beautiful antique phone!