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I've been through the desert on a horse with no name It felt good to be out of the rain In the desert you can't remember your name 'Cause there ain't no one for to give you no pain La la la la la la… Song: A Horse With No Name Song by America, Songwriter: Dewey Bunnell forgotten gone and forgotten again made me attend they read the whole list my name does not exist how can i resist the urge to scream out my name forget it they won’t remember that, either way I remember that they forgot and can laugh at it why not?! 10/11/2022

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Date: 10/12/2022 8:40:00 PM
Revealing, then reflective and 'take-a-step-back-egoless! Love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2022 8:53:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 10/11/2022 10:34:00 AM
Kim,I’ve sure missed reading your work. I’ve been quite I’ll for several months. This poem approached feelings of desolation and despair for me. But then you — maybe aside the Waymaker, turned over the attitude apple cart, turning Despair to The-Other-Cheek. Blessed, Bad to Good. A benevolent read!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2022 1:37:00 PM
So sorry that you’ve not been well, Sally. Hope you are feeling better <3 Yes, there are times when we can feel sorry for ourselves but in the end perhaps we are better having survived difficult things. Thank you for your comment, sweet lady. xx
Date: 10/11/2022 10:33:00 AM
our poem expanded a bit on your quote. Great.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2022 1:37:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/11/2022 9:51:00 AM
Why attach ourselves, through recognition, to insignificance? Christ and you are a Majority! Excellent write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2022 1:45:00 PM
Oh how right you are and I believe He shows me that all the time. God bless you, Joe!

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