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Amended 20 01 2012

In your error there is a'way making Whilst striving in your searches collating, Are they blackly scrawled your inky walls.? Truly "A vice" this undertaking... Explain peruse or buying extra shoes True vanity versus inspiration. Copyright Joe Maverick 2011

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 3:47:00 AM

Hi Joe, is this for Susan's contest..., stopping by to say good night~PD

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/9/2012 5:49:00 AM

Is there vanity by 'peruse', Joe? Or is it just spreading your poetic wings? Well Lebkuchenmann, I hope you acquire the shoes of Hermes and post more of your amazing writes!:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2012 7:58:00 AM

Joe a quick question for ya. In your new contest: are old haiku ok and can they be a series of haiku or do you expect just one?

Don Johnson

Date: 5/7/2012 5:08:00 PM

the subtle union in the knot, used by sailors since time forgot, a bowler knot, says my dad says he, bowline thinks me all at sea, the no slip knot, tied horse, he got, and still gets tied by me. dinna choke the horse you see... "forget the knots" thanks Joe Maverick Don Johnson

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2012 9:15:00 PM

Hi, there, my friend! How's it going?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 6:46:00 AM

While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Joe. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 3:14:00 AM

JOE,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

Don Johnson

Date: 2/7/2012 3:52:00 PM

well done maverick ol mate, the cards you dealt were just first rate, vanity for shoes that fit, me stinking feet wont have a baar of it... sometimes:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Joe. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 2/6/2012 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations Joe on your win.Thanks for your kind comments at my pages.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/5/2012 6:11:00 PM

Keep up the good work! Congrad's Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 2/5/2012 10:52:00 AM

Joe congrats on your win,..David

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/5/2012 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Joe

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/28/2012 6:04:00 PM

Label the type of meter on the bottom of the verse Joe Light & Love [Not sure what this write means dear? each couplet seems like the beginning of its own verse?]

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2012 6:23:00 PM

Thanks Joe I didn't know how much work I was setting myself up for LOL correcting 35 poems for assorted meter GAH! I only know 3 meters LOL [hope they pick those 3 /1 already didn't LOL] anyway it's all good I learn too! PS Joe dear YOU MUST have 10 syllables per line to be pentameter penta 5 x 2 iams per meter = 10 syllables see? [1 iam 1 IAM] see? [unstress STRESS] see? [ un LEASH] 2 syllables, 2 iambs, 1 foot of iambic meter

Don Johnson

Date: 1/12/2012 3:14:00 PM

the interlude brings fortitude, denys the old frustration, but in the solid quiteatude, (new one) unleashes inspiration... on ya Joe M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 10:30:00 PM

Hey there Joe. I think I heard you are doing a contest? IF so, I'll have to check it out. Just trying to catch up with my friends here after being out of commission with my computer a few days!!

Don Johnson

Date: 12/26/2011 7:23:00 PM

quirky scratchy kind of verse, to tickle you right out of the hearse, great little bloody verse, well done here Joe 4 trying.... BLOODY HAPPY NEW YEAR MATE!:)

Judy Ball

Date: 12/17/2011 12:57:00 PM

I always enjoy reading your stuff Joe. You make us pay attention to what we are reading and you always have such a good humor about it. Love it. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB :)

Daver Austin

Date: 12/2/2011 3:33:00 PM

Very inspired, seeing as how vanity usually wins. I think. daver

Don Johnson

Date: 11/24/2011 5:26:00 PM

deep stuff mate ....love it... good onya Joe

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/16/2011 3:42:00 PM

hhmmm I did not buy extra shoes but did peruse and came up with true inspiration is always versus verses of vanity. and when inky walls are blackly scrawled ... I can't see the words too well.... and if in error there is a making then whilst striving in searches collating there is still a creation ,Okay Joe that's all I got on it. brain starting to smoke a little now ..better stop. : )

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/6/2011 9:46:00 AM

Thought provoking piece Joe, but that is the norm when it comes to your gems, enjoyed it!! love Wilma

Date: 11/4/2011 2:42:00 PM

Interesting thoughts to ponder about. I like the title. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

Judy Ball

Date: 11/4/2011 10:16:00 AM

Hmmmm This is real food for thought my friend. Makes me think someone is having trouble linking their words together to make some kind of sense out of their thoughts. "So many thoughts, such a small mind?" Is that it. Whatever, I like this. God Bless, JB