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forgiving brought me peace

the dark cloud ever present
holding a grudge was only hurting me
~ so i let it go



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Hello Line, There’s strength and wisdom in those lines and it feels like we could all use. I admire how you turn a hard truth into something freeing for it carries your spirit of resilience. Blessings, Line, Daniel
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Daniel ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:36 PM
wise actions, indeed.
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 4:57 PM
thanks, Sara ~
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