Forgiveness Yes Or No

Forgiveness sometimes takes some time                                          
One may not want to make up with a rhyme                                   
Rough words said can cut like a sharp knife                                   
Giving way to unforgiveness that can ruin a life                                   
I say we should not bring pain but always bring love                           
Very often we react out of hurt and unlove                                       
Even when the other person did not mean it                                      
Now we need to say sorry but how will it fit                                     
Everyone is different some can play dense                                
Sorry is a huge word and can make some very tense               
Saying I love you can mend the friendship fence                         

Date Written: 5/24/2021                                                                                                                                                       
Note: Acrostic Rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Burman Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Well written Paula...Hugs, Shonima.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Thank you, for writing. Glad you like this acrostic write. Have a blessed day/weekend................
Balasubramanian Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Wonderful acrostic. Many great lines. I agree with you. Take care, God bless!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Thank you, for writing. Glad you like this acrostic forgiveness write. Have a blessed day...............
Alex Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Nice acrostics.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Thank you, for writing. Glad you like this acrostics write. Have a blessed day...............
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Hello Paula, forgiveness is the best. It mends a broken friendship. A broken heart. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 3:01 PM
hello Paula, yes forgivness is the best. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Thank you, for writing. Yes, forgiveness is the best. Have a blessed day...............
Allison Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 12:02 PM
super acrostic , wise words indeed but sometimes it is nigh on impossible to forgive and forget:-( hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 1:50 PM
Thank you, for writing and for your kind words. You are right, "sometimes it is nigh on impossible to forgive and forget." I find I can forgive but it can be very hard to forget when a love one (Family or Friend) has deeply hurt you. Have a blessed day...............
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