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No one repented for what they did to you. You've been unhappy since that day. As you're well aware, this is a major outdo. Extricate yourself and admit their reply anyway. They stranded, estimating you'll fall down. This claimed partner just pawed you as prey. Still, hate and gall won't let you go around. Allow yourself to wane and accept him anyway. You feel ashamed when you look in the mirror. You estimate your errors, nearly every day. The pathway of living will indeed be clearer. Even if you don't cause the fractures anyway.
Written: July 26, 2022

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Date: 7/27/2022 9:28:00 PM
When people do not express regret over the mistakes they have done to us, we feel a kind of resentment ! But forgiving others can build bridges in relationships ! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem and its great message !
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Date: 7/27/2022 2:04:00 PM
Without being able to compromise and respecting each other then I predict a rocky road ahead. Hope you're keeping well Lasaad. Tom
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Date: 7/27/2022 6:38:00 PM
I am grateful to you for your comment and for your concern about how I am doing. Please accept my best wishes for your well-being.
Date: 7/27/2022 1:53:00 PM
A serious poem with truths and sometimes it is family who acted really nasty. I cannot say much more as it is somewhat serious but very well penned Lasaad. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 7/27/2022 5:50:00 AM
Forgive and forget wins the day. A positive message as along as the relationship is reciprocal.
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Date: 7/27/2022 1:16:00 AM
I think the first step is to forgive yourself, then your enemy.
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