Forgiveness Feels Like a Rotted Grave

She left him angry and alone

Broken and in despair

His heart a shredded bleeding mess

His feelings for her were bitter

They were toxic and cold

As he felt the knife she had driven

Deep within his lone dark soul

The taste of aspic poisonous and rife

Why had she destroyed him

Why did she tear him limb from limb

And yet deep within he knew he should forgive her

But that would feel like a rotted grave

Where his carcass twisted and distorted is

Wracked with torment with a heart full of maggots

Feasting on him like a necrotising fasciitis decay. 

31/5/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/16/2018 11:05:00 PM
Well penned, Fauxcroft. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Date: 6/17/2018 7:02:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 6/8/2018 8:08:00 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Fauxcroft :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated Faux
Date: 6/8/2018 7:42:00 AM
"a necrotizing fasciitis decay" wow, amazing metaphors. great poem dear Fauxcroft thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thank you very much for appreciating my poem. Faux
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