Forgiveness

Took me by surprise friendship meant nothing to you built trust then betrayed sorrow and anger bedfellows that give no sleep open wound is raw pardon is my salve as the Lord does unto me mercy I must show not weakness but strength rise above in faith and love healing my reward For contest 'Forgiveness', sponsor Laura Loo 18th August 2016

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 2:29:00 AM

Words do have the ability to heal. I love your senryu set Viv! Congratulations on your second placement! 7 ; )

Viv Wigley
Date: 8/23/2016 10:34:00 PM

Thanks, Connie x

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/22/2016 2:19:00 AM

'Bedfellows, that give no sleep". Nice one. Congratulations. Kai

Viv Wigley
Date: 8/23/2016 10:34:00 PM

Thanks, Kai x

Jean Murray

Date: 8/21/2016 5:29:00 PM

What's your secret Viv? Well done, whatever it is.

Jean Murray
Date: 8/22/2016 6:10:00 PM

Yugh!

Viv Wigley
Date: 8/22/2016 12:44:00 AM

Marmite, Jean. x

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 4:55:00 PM

Viv, great wisdom in your inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Sandra

Viv Wigley
Date: 8/22/2016 12:44:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, life's too short to carry grudges. Viv x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2016 1:58:00 PM

Viv, Thanks for dropping by..You have made my day brighter with your kind and encouraging comments..Sara...Congrats on your win with this fine work about forgiveness..I enjoyed reading it.

Viv Wigley
Date: 8/22/2016 12:43:00 AM

Thanks Sara, very kind. Viv x