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Forgiveness

In flash of lightning on clouds' darkest tide
Christ gave light to the world -He gave His life
to forgive all our sins, He suffered…died
Exemplifying His loving deeds  for
we’re His children, in Him we must unite.
His sacrifice gave Him unrivalled sore
to make His Love reign in this world, not grudge
Hatred inflicts pains of body, mind...heart--
Spoiling one's relationship, soul is smudged.
No sadness  follows or unending war
if our contrite heart will swallow its pride
and His Holy Spirit mediates and guide.
Jettison our heart’s  hurts through forgiveness
and sail on life’s light flow with happiness.


©2015Leonora Galinta
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Sept. 30, 2015         11.15 pm

Also inspired by a bible verse:
Ephesians 4:32
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Salehi Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Very Nice Sonnet.... Beautiful name...
A  Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Without it, we have no balance. Leonora, stopping by to wish you the best Birthday Ever.......... hAppY bIrthdAY tO YOU.... hAppY bIrthdAY tO YOU... hAppY bIrthdAY tOOOO YOU..... LOVE SKAT
Gasun Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 6:39 AM
Yes, you are right my dearest sis and friend, Skat! Thank you so much for sharing your precious time to read this humble poem of mine especially with the inspiration of one of my favorite bible verses and also your lovely words and warm greetings and wishes on my birthday. May I sing with you please: happy birthday to us, happy birthday to us, happy birthday happy birthday, happy birthday to us... clap! It's our dearest sis PD's birthday too!::))))) Many hugs back at you!
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Forgiveness on our part is for us and not the one forgiven..Unforgiveness eats away at the soul of man or woman..Thanks for the visit to my page..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Gasun Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Yes, you are right my very dear friend, Sara. You are much welcome my very dear friend. It's my pleasure to read you awesome works. I'll be back soon if you don't mind to read more. And, I thank you more on your wonderful visit and lovely comments on my humble poem. Many hugs from me to you!
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 1:39 PM
so when you say Monday next week, do you mean like tomorrow here in the states? Or a whole week later? What is the exact day, Leonora? You are such a sweetie, and I hope all your birthday wishes come true.
Gasun Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 6:19 AM
Yes, my very dear friend, Andrea. Tomorrow, 5th of Oct in US and now on my side of the world. We're of the same date my dear friend that's why I can't forget also your birthday. You are a sweetie and thank you so much for your loving greetings and wishes. God bless you! Many hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Good interpretation of the theme, dearie. So sorry I did not wish you happy birthday yet. I had seen your name at PD's blog and it went out of my mind to come tell you happy birthday. BELATED BEST WISHES.
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Hugs back at you!
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Oh, it's ok my very dear friend, Andrea! Anyway, my birthday is not yet today, few days more to go, its still on Monday next week. Sorry I forgot to whisper to you coz I was super bz, at the same time with my dearest mom. But I can see I'm already being greeted in advance and my loving sis and BFF PD already made a birthday blog??? Wow so advance! :)))). I'll be there in a bit. Thank you for informing me and your greetings, still very early:))) TYTYSSM!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 8:16 AM
A great source of inspiration! I read your collaboration with Linda and I see you are celebrating a birthday, congratulations and a happy birthday hug.
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:31 PM
Oh, thank you so much my dear friend, Richard. I'm glad you went and read our collaboration poem and enjoyed it. I treasure so much that poem. It was always a great pleasure and honor to collaborate with her. I'm sorry if the reply comes only now. I'll try to catch up soon, promise!
Lindley Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Truly beautiful and truthful poetry. Adding this gem to my fav list.. Thanks
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Oh. thank you so much my very dear friend, Robert. I feel both humbled and honored for you faving this poem of mine. God bless! I'll visit you so soon. Hugs!
A   Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 9:35 PM
A beautiful poem my sweet sister and BFF... Leo, his Holy Spirit's what I count on every day. What would this world be without forgiveness. You have written a very beautiful verse.... I enjoy your poetry .. Forever & ever... Your are my number one friend and poet... LINDA
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Going back to your lovely comments. I thank you so much gain my loving sis. This is also with the inspiration of the bible verse above and the Holy Spirit which is keeping us alive every day despite the trials that come along the way. I'm so glad you enjoyed my humble poem dearest sis. Thank you , thank you so much. You're also my number one friend, sis and poet.
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Oh, thank you so much my loving sis and BFF. You don't know how happy I am to see your comments, I can't wait anymore to reply you here. I'll be on your blog a bit. TYTYSSSM for remembering my birthday. And I can't never forget yours too. Our Birthday Together! Cheers again with my tight hugs and kisses! Love you sis! Kisses!
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September 30, 2015 at 8:06 PM
"Jettison our heart’s hurts through forgiveness". Profound statement within a beautiful sonnet, Leo. Lovely thoughts! Advance Happy Birthday! Hugs!
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Oh thank you so much for your wonderful comments my very dear kabayan and friend and also your advance birthday greetings! Many hugs back at you!
Leiser Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Beautiful sonnet of forgiveness that Christ has given to us who believe, Leonora. I enjoyed it very much :)
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Laura. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Hugs!
Andresen Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 12:38 PM
- Forgiveness between people on earth .... the world could become beautiful - No killing, no tears ... no more blood - A wonderful poem that I cherish, dear Leonora (7 +) - Best wishes and bear hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 2:47 AM
I agree with you my dearest friend, Anne Lise! Nothing will be lost if people forgive and forget because we'll gain God's grace instead. If so, heaven will start on earth. I appreciate so much again for your loving visit and your encouraging words and rating my loving friend. God bless you and best wishes too! Thank you for the bear hugs. Likewise my dearest friend! Hugs and kisses!
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