Notes About The Poem

Forgiveness

When waking to a new dawned morn,
refreshed from healthy, dreamy sleep,
we soon confront all held, old scorn
that we have yet to cleanly sweep.

We will sip pain in our coffee,
day long notice it in our seat.
Ignored, resentment will ill spree
through us and constantly repeat.

Hurts fester, ever growing scope.
Our anger will feed while we dine,
when bathing rage can froth like soap
while we read, bile shows in each line.

Only forgiveness will bring light
to ease the weight of each felt slight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kauffman Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 10:54 PM
Really nice use of personification - vivid images, CayCay. So important that we don't let the negative own us. A well written, wise sonnet with very creative, descriptive poetic phrases. Congratulatios!
Scars Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 6:44 PM
forgiveness is such a difficult thing to process, but it is true what you said it does bring "light". Congrats on your win! -luloo *smiles*
A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Superb write Caycay! Congrats on great win!
Cheema Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:28 AM
Hi CayCay on winning over anger! Congrats!
A  Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:03 PM
CayCay, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Such great words of wisdom in your modern Sonnet, CayCay. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Nice win CayCay.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 4:49 PM
A great message CayCay congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Donnelly Ellis Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 11:36 PM
Amen
Godwin Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Brother Ben. Thank you, Joan ... CayCay
Hunjeri Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 1:48 PM
VERY VERY true forgiveness does free. this line really caught my eye and my mind "You will sip pain in your coffee"
Godwin Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Hi, Njeri - I hope all is great in your world. I do believe anger will color your world until you use forgiveness to set YOURSELF free. Thank you for reading and commenting ... CayCay
Nunez Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 9:16 PM
Wise words, of your sonnet, Cay. Very good metaphors too. all the best in the contest. hugs!
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Hi, Kim - big hug back. Thank you for the compliments and well wishes. I'll jump over to see if you've written about forgiveness. I hope you have because I enjoy your poems very much ... CayCay
Pinet Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Your words speak with the voice of forgiveness and your mind set flows onto the page and we can reflect on the power of your message within our lives.
Godwin Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Emile, for reading and commenting. Your comments are such beautiful prose, I enjoy them ... CayCay
Guth Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Great message - Forgiveness
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you reading and commenting ... CayCay
Dunn Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Dear CayCay Forgiveness is truly a hard task for some, but to me it is the only way to live, what good does it do anyone to hold on to anger, it takes away from the joy of life that you could be having, and life is just to short to worry about such things as hatred, anger or ignorence, let it go and move onwards and live each day to the fulfillest, cheri
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Also, when you harbor anger against someone they become as a prisoner in your mind where you are also imprisoned, constantly watching over them. Such anger then has power over you, stealing your thoughts and energy. Very wasteful. CayCay
Woods    Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 7:03 PM
The path to peace is through forgiveness, and without we do fester. Sometimes we have to wipe the blackboard (telling my age now!) clean. Very well illustrated CayCay
Godwin Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 8:03 PM
Darn it, Mark - our ages are none of our business - if we were to pay attention to them we would severely limit ourselves. (don't forget to clap the erasers together after cleaning the board.) Thank you for commenting ... CayCay
Raha Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 5:13 PM
The feelings expressed in this piece is so fresh and lingering.Very well done.
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Hey there, Miraj - I sure enjoyed reading your 'rhyme' poems last night. I appreciate all your comments on my poetry ... CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 3:12 PM
healing is releasing the hurt and allowing peace to reside in our hearts.. a beautiful, warm pice.. huggs
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Hi, Nette - I enjoy finding you here and reading your insightful comments. Thank you ... CayCay
Tor Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Wonderful write Caycay. Wisdom at it's best. Loved your truths expressed here.
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Hi, Michael - thank you for your sweet and encouraging comments, I truly appreciate you and your words ... CayCay
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