Forgiveness

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Agustin Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 7:26 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Oule Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Congs, short and precise good theme, i loved reading it.
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Patrick:-) Hugs Jan xx
Squyres Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:51 AM
A bit dark and foreboding for my taste in poetry... but still I find it forceful with content.... Myself: Forgiveness frees the spirit of hate and despair... a burden the soul needs to find peace within. ... Congrats on your win.
A  Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Patrick, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
A   Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Patrick, Congratulations ... Linda
Carmack Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 2:29 PM
I used to think the same way, but maybe what makes them pathetic is not the forgiveness, it is them not leaving. Congrats.
Feeney Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 7:16 PM
just to clarify the poem was actually about myself and my anger at me forgiving them :)
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 7:01 PM
This is deep and sad Patrick - good luck in the contest :-) Hugs Jan xx
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