Forgiveness

Forgiveness is also dawn light on those water-worn stones
Forgiveness is a midnight river, sluggish and cold,
It shatters ice in the heart, thawing frozen bars of pride.

It flows through driftwood memories—gnarled, half-submerged bones,
Each knot a scar where grief and betrayal once were bold.
Forgiveness is also dawn light on those water-worn stones.

The current heavy with lodged pain, with roots ungroned,
Yet soft fingers of gold coax shadows into gold.
It shatters ice in the heart, thawing frozen bars of pride.

It is gardener’s gentle hands, though bleeding, when love owns
Its weeds of rancor, tilled soil where new rosebuds unfold.
Forgiveness is also dawn light on those water-worn stones.

I remember every ripple, every edge of what’s gone,
Yet in that remembering learn each wave must be controlled.
It shatters ice in the heart, thawing frozen bars of pride.

May this tender light linger, a balm after long nights, known
As hope beneath our feet, mercy quietly extolled.
Forgiveness is also dawn light on those water-worn stones,
It shatters ice in the heart, thawing frozen bars of pride.
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Forgiveness is a complex process as it involves both the forgiver and the forgiven, as each will go on their separate path to find a resolution. The resolution is a transformative entity that unshackles one’s past, seeking a renewed spirit and a better future; albeit, forgiveness is an ongoing process, which in the end, both will become better for it.
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 10:05 AM
- Pride is one of the main keys ... truth in your lines, Jay - Lovely poem :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
George Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Villanelle is a tough poetic form. Yet, you have come up with a beautiful and meaningful villanelle. Forgiveness "shatters ice in the heart, thawing frozen bars of pride' . How very true! Though it is not easy, it relieves us of a heavy burden.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Your "Forgiveness" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading this one.  "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a Blessed day writing away..........
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