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Forgiveness

You ask forgiveness
but admit no wrong,
with a voice of litheness
you sing your song
of love~

it is a deceit,
a counterfeit created
from sweet words 
and heaps
of ice-cold jade,

carved into illusions 
of dreams
and gossamer rings
that snap to entrap
naive hearts

without mercy
for the butterfly's 
torn wings
and beauty's descent 
into death.
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Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Yes, some are not genuine, sadly!
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