Forgiveness

where some people beg,
forgiveness is resistant.
have another look
at the Savior’s eyes— the sea
teeming with mercy and grace.


2/6/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fenn Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 6:39 PM
Hi Kim, I’m sure Jesus is smiling on this tanka. Well put!
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Wonderful! May God bless you dear lovely Kim , have a good time with love and deep respect.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:46 PM
You are so very sweet! Thank you and God bless you in all ways!
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:13 PM
wow, this is super!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Thank you so much!
Brul Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 3:01 PM
Oh, what a sublime tanka! Made me speechless upon contemplating how true it is!Definitely a FAVE!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, JCB! <3
Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Good one. Yes, He is love for God is love. He loves us no matter what we do but He doesn't love the sin. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 5:51 AM
Heavenly, dearest Kim! Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:14 AM
Thank you, Demetrios! <3
Buhagiar Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 2:01 AM
My thoughts are always with those who die even suicides. May God have mercy on them. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 4:36 AM
Yesterday was one year since one young man overdosed. I am friends with his grandma. It happened at her house. I am hopeful that he knew the Lord. He was troubled. May God have mercy indeed! God bless you! ~
Horsman Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 10:15 PM
I'm thinking of those lifeboats and the grew, along with the lifeguards, also a more general seen, of those living on the street. Maybe i am totally wrong Kim. but your poetry does tend to stimulate my mind..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 4:34 AM
I always enjoy seeing where other people go with my poetry. I’ve seen an expression of complete grief in the street more than likely coupled with drugs. This one young lady I will never forget. God bless you, Harry ~
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