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Forgive Your Enemies

Vicar Tynan sat amongst his roses in a Friday morning sun, that shone in beams through willow branch and leaves, where it’s time to think of Sunday and what sermon must be done, when he heard squabbling coming from his eaves. Two blackbirds were in heated conflict for the right to choose a mate, and of course with this must come the territory. The Vicar’s concentration’s broken ‘til the action did abate, with peace returning to his little arboury. But still his mind was delving poorly for what subject he must choose, ‘til another quirk of nature faced the Vicar. A small and dainty little Blue Wren bought thinking for the pews, fighting with its own reflection on his car. Even though the Wren was warring with the rival that is him, what is behind the madness struck a chord. And compare this to our hateful world where all is looking grim, ‘forgive your enemies’ should strongly be implored. It is with the fire and brimstone that the Vicar chose to preach, denigrating all the roads that lead to hell, but in this wisely chosen sermon his finale was to teach, forgiveness must be in our hearts as well. “Who here today” the Vicar thundered, “Have forgave their enemies?” And to his flock his questionnaire is brief, but to the Vicar there’s a problem for not everyone agrees. Only seven hands rose up to this belief. The Vicar from his pulpit glared around the bowing flock; in threatening tone repeated his attack, and by the looks of it he shamed them for they all had taken stock; the exception - Mrs. Bruton down the back. Vicar Tynan’s voice is calmer on approaching down the aisle; spoken with assurance that might sway … “Mrs Bruton” asked the Vicar clasping hands and with a smile, “You won’t forgive your enemies you say?” Mrs. Bruton smiling sweetly shuffled first then touched her hair, “I have not got one enemy,” she said. The Vicar’s eyes they sparkled and then smiling at her there, began asking Mrs. Bruton’s line instead. “It is unusual Mrs. Bruton, that your enemies are none. Will you tell us all how old that you may be?” The Vicar waiting eagerly; heard charming Mrs. Bruton stun … “Vicar Tynan - I have turned ninety three”. The Vicar’s voice rose in crescendo with the statement he just heard, to praise blessing on the lesson that unfurled. “Mrs. Bruton, please come to the front, so we can hear your word, why there is not a foe here in your world”. With a walking stick she tottered; Mrs. Bruton down the aisle, and prior to speaking anxiously she twitches. Mrs. Bruton at first stammered then she gave a beaming smile - “It so happens that I outlived all the es!”

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Date: 1/1/2021 12:38:00 PM
Excellent poetry as always, well no wonder she has no enemy she outlived them all - IF I get to 93, let it be, but please God I have my wit and senses about me . You are such a wonderful poet. Happy New Year my friend to you and yours and may 2021 be kind to us all. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/9/2021 6:18:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... you know I never thought about that until I was amongst people with dementia. These unfortunate folk can say funny things but it is a sad situation. Thank you Jennifer and might I had, it's been such to read your work and the comments you write - bye for now Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 12/27/2020 6:13:00 PM
If you can't beat 'em, then just outlive 'em! Good one, Lindsay! Holiday Joy, Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/31/2020 8:11:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... that's the way to do it Gershon. I must keep it in mind - I trust you enjoyed the festive season Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 12/26/2020 6:02:00 PM
A wonderful story and poem, Lindsay. I enjoyed it :)
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/31/2020 8:09:00 PM
G'day Angela ... there is certainly a method in her madness. Her action may have made an enemy out of the Vicar though - thank you Angela - Lindsay
Date: 12/26/2020 1:14:00 PM
Age doth have its privileges, Lindsay. Another Masterpiece from the Master of Wit! Good on you, Mate - Bob H
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/31/2020 8:06:00 PM
Hello Bob ... oh yes indeed. At my age if I don't want to go somewhere I can grab my back or knee and get away with it. Doesn't make me popular though - catch you Bob - Lindsay
Date: 12/26/2020 10:59:00 AM
That works for me, too! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/31/2020 8:03:00 PM
Hello Rico ... Go on! You're the most admired person in Hawaii - thanks Rico - Lindsay PS: An ex President's fans may disagree.
Date: 12/26/2020 9:42:00 AM
Love the ending and the entire verse. Pangie
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/31/2020 8:00:00 PM
Happy New Year Panagiota ... thank you your encouraging comment - regards - Lindsay
Date: 12/26/2020 12:00:00 AM
Good one Lindsay, well at least she was telling the truth.lol Hope you had a lovely Christmas. Tom
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 12/31/2020 7:59:00 PM
Hello Tom ... I think she might have buggered up the intended message - thanks Tom - Lindsay

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