Forgive Me

The life I had before you came along
Was nothing
Now that your with me
I am strong.
Theres not one thing in this world I could do
Expecially if I dont have you
You are the crystals in my eyes.
The laughs and cries
I never ment to break your heart.
I never wanted us to be apart.
You are nothing now
And either am I
When I think about everything we had 
I just laugh, but I start to cry
because I know I messed up
You are the most wonderful thing 
And I broke our promise ring
Now, I beg for your forgiveness
and all these people are here to witness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/18/2011 6:47:00 PM
deep write, we all make mistakes but learn from them of course hope all goes well we all deserve forgiveness,..p.d.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:27:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kali. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:30:00 AM
Smile ~ We all stumble and fall; often miss the potentially defining moments offered along lifes path but, nothing is by chance thus, we continue forward never regretting nor looking back and, what shall be was meant to be so, never hold close to your precious heart and Soul, what was rather, the dreams of what shall hopefully one day be ~ "Beautifully Brushed Canvas of 'You; Lovely!!!'" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have 'A Very Beautiful Day' My Dear &, 'Keep Painting;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:56:00 AM
I like it it is something that most people would feel strongly about
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