Forging Good Deeds

If water can penetrate the hardest stones
    Let the Heavens storm forth God's word
      lashing rocks round His altar 

  Glancing off those that pay no heed
    Saturating those who feel the need
      ~ forging good deeds, sans the screed
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October 31, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Your end rhymes almost compete with the meaning, both really good.
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