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Forget the Scales

A fresh cream doughnut
Oozing raspberry jam, sweet
Sticky yummy, more

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Charmaine Chircop

March 28, 2009 at 11:35 AM

yummy yummy,forget the scales,you made me read and smile,at xmas and easter i dnt dare to use the scale,im allergic to it,but in summer i use my scale every day ,a great reminder not to eat sweets,but cant resist that doughnut;-)

Carrie Richards

March 27, 2009 at 1:06 PM

Along with a cup of coffee....and I'm happy!!

Barbara Gorelick

March 27, 2009 at 11:46 AM

My downfall..doughnuts..sigh. Good one. BG I do think its a Senryu too..anda darned good one. BG

Anna Mayall

March 27, 2009 at 11:14 AM

i liked the way you used oozing ....great job

Tyesha Ehigiator

March 27, 2009 at 9:55 AM

Oh no, I can't even think about this, It just sounds so good...I have been trying to stay away from the Junk..MMM, soooo tempting..Yummy one here, Great Job, GB Always, Tyesha

Jim Wilson

March 27, 2009 at 8:02 AM

This is very funny; these are the kinds of fantasies I have when I'm on a diet. Personally, I would call this a senryu, but whatever you call it, well done.