Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

Forget Me-Knots

~Without~

He loves me`
He loves me without'

Sometime has passed, 
I'm still without.
A wish~
I forgot to make that night.
Heaven and earth, I cast behind my eyes. 
A beautiful sail, that in time will collide.

A tower, I can't reach.
Without the proxy deepness in your beating, 
life will hold no breach.
Without the intense shine in your eyes.
I'm an exile, In my own home.
I can't find the sweetness it holds.
I run from myself.
In hopes that my future never unfolds.
A cure, I live without.
I bathe under my oak tree.
This bacteria I can't live without.
I'm breathing and lost with out glee.
Injured on this orchid ground.
I crawl without a kissing sound.

I face the golden sun, as the rain pours on me.
Without the feeling of my skin.
I have no reason to be~
Fungus grows in my domain.
I have nothing, YET~ I HAVE IT ALL!
The friction grows and burns blisters all over my wall.
The swelling compels a surface only I feel.
Without the look and voice of your laughter.
I walk a long* long walk. 

A life without, your breath. 
Is no life at all...
Outcropped, from the outside. 
Lacking the perfect boundary.
This world shops for an appearance without surface.

My smile hangs without the beauty found in the word happiness.
In a world full of "be"gotten knots.

:-)

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Sheri Fresonke Harper January 16, 2014 at 5:45 PM Sad love poem, it is terrible to be forgotten but I love the flower and poem, nice work.

Alexis Bennett January 14, 2014 at 12:32 PM wow. i really liked it. i could see the whole thing in my head and it rang in my heart too!

Lucilla Carrillo December 12, 2012 at 12:09 PM What a great poem Linda. You really know how to reach the hearts and souls . Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Michael J. Falotico November 18, 2012 at 7:25 AM Excellent poetry.. stopping by to say HI...and say you are my FAVORITE POET..... xoxo Michael

Harry Horsman August 29, 2012 at 10:14 AM A classic from you p.d, awesome rendition of profoundness which would inspire the greatest poets of all.

Harry Horsman August 29, 2012 at 10:14 AM A classic from you p.d, awesome rendition of profoundness which would inspire the greatest poets of all.

Doreen Wright July 3, 2012 at 10:01 PM I have nothing yet I have it all...DEEP!!!

Nathan D. June 22, 2012 at 10:25 AM sadness

John Aaron Green June 8, 2012 at 7:25 PM You are a brilliant...master poet...love your writing...and your friendship......

Ravindra K Kapoor May 7, 2012 at 11:30 PM Another superb writes my friend, where emotions and desires have touched new heights from your creative pen. Sometimes with hopes and sometimes with tears in eyes. 'Injured on this orchid ground, I crawl without a kissing sound." The entire Poem is just beautiful and a new Gem in your treasure. Love and best wishes always…Ravindra…Poet D

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2012 at 10:45 PM I believe you, Irma. I imagine your house with miles of smiles. Just look at that little baby picture of ya (or is that someone else?) thanks for reading my smiles poem. I am not very happy with it!

Roman Chebukin February 24, 2012 at 9:35 PM I'm confused. Wats missing?

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2012 at 8:43 PM HI, Irma, finally getting started on comments for the night. I am waiting for your NEXT poem. come on, you can do one!!! Luv, Andrea

Lizanne Scholtz February 19, 2012 at 2:49 PM A beautiful heartfelt write p.d, love Elizabeth

Paloma Walker February 14, 2012 at 8:10 PM I love the part that says, "I run from myself in hopes my future never unfolds." This is so beautiful and powerful. You not only create strong images in my head as I read this but especially strong emotions! Great work.

Robert Johnson February 13, 2012 at 3:04 PM The emptiness is ours to cherish. But without love we're bound to perish. The grayness that emits it's charm. Won't neccesarily cause us harm. It's hard to know which rose to pluck. Or if it's love or if it's luck. But time will tell you when to call. For with each breath your heart will fall.

Dinda Minardi February 13, 2012 at 9:23 AM What's wrong, dear P.D. What is all if you can't taste it? A perfect dark writing from you, dear. i hope it's not coming from your black mood. :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 12, 2012 at 11:25 PM This is a beautiful, descriptive verse. You have captured your emotions with such powerful imagery. There's beauty in all human emotions. We all feel this way at times. Your poem resonates with me. Truly incredible.

Jslambert Mister Roboto February 12, 2012 at 9:14 PM Striking quite a few chords with this delivery! Fungus is among us...Exile! NICE!

Mark Anthony Cotterman February 12, 2012 at 6:54 PM i love this piece. it is a declaration of your state of feeling and it is so powerfully written. incredible poem.

Tim B February 12, 2012 at 5:38 PM My thoughts on this are that it is excellent poetry because it captures the essence of emotions and smacks them right dab down on the page. They are powerful, dramatic, and vibrant emotions, but my hope for you PD is that you find that happiness upon which to hang your smile. Only the truly lost value the external, intrinsically we are sinners from the start and resolute opposition of this nature must be our highest aspiration. Cathartic is it not, this poetry? :)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 12, 2012 at 5:01 PM WOW! Dramatically infectuous! :) Very compelling a write, PD. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich February 12, 2012 at 3:37 PM Irma, don't ever sell yourself short. Your imagery here shines with uniqueness. Also, You won the Soup's INternational contest for that exact same reason. sometimes you just come up with some really cool imagery that can't be beat. That is the poet's soul in you breaking free. the last line of this poem, for example, "my smile hangs. . . " outstanding!

Jancarl Campi February 12, 2012 at 3:03 PM a wonderful write. so many good lines here. i promise i will noy steal any. Take care and my your valentine day be filled with roses and candy, XOXO> Jancarl

Robert Pettit February 12, 2012 at 12:53 PM A good description of your personal feelings. Good way to express yourself PD.

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