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FORGET-ME-NOTS

Minuscule seeds lay in my palm A promise of beauty to come Tiniest seedlings quickly emerge Encouraged by raindrops and sun Teeniest blue flowers suddenly appear Their sweet smiley faces are so full of fun Written 10th April 2020 Contest 6 Lines Of Cheerful Rhyme Sponsor Line Gauthier Contest Strand Pick 8 Sponsor Brian Strand 3rd Place

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Date: 6/24/2020 3:16:00 AM
Bit like our poetry Ann,we sow the seed some become flowers in anothers eye.Stay creative
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/24/2020 4:55:00 PM
Yes that is so true Brian, I love that analogy. Many thanks for your welcome visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/16/2020 7:29:00 PM
Delicate and pretty. I wish I knew what they look like now.
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Date: 4/20/2020 2:53:00 PM
That is exactly how I would described them Caren d & p. they are tiny little blue flowers that come out in the Spring and each year they self seed and look so pretty amongst the spring bulbs. Take care my friend with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/12/2020 1:45:00 PM
A nice one Ann, a rather enjoyable piece. Hope you're ok, keep safe and well, have a blessed resurrection day, Blessings always,Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/20/2020 2:36:00 PM
Bless you dear Gordon and pleased you enjoyed my poem. I am ok and I hope you are too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/12/2020 4:40:00 AM
I love forget me nots, lovely flowers.. Cherry blossoms are my favourite..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/12/2020 5:54:00 AM
Yes they are such a sweet old fashioned flower and I love their swathes of blue in amongst the spring bulbs. Thank you for your welcome comments dear SO. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/11/2020 1:48:00 PM
I love forget-me-nots. They were abundant in the springtime garden of my grandmother. Thank you for reminding me of her today and for the walk in your garden! Congratulations on your winning poem. Good luck in the contest! Happy Easter dear friend.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/11/2020 5:09:00 PM
Bless you dear Sam and so glad you were able to enjoy a walk in the garden full of these sweet flowers. Keep safe and well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/10/2020 7:49:00 AM
what a sweet poem Ann. they are a cute little flower indeed:-) hugs jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/11/2020 5:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan, I really do appreciate your comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 4/10/2020 3:29:00 AM
Best wishes for a top win, Ann Panagiotaxx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/10/2020 4:34:00 AM
Bless you dear friend ~ thank you, with kindest thoughts Ann xx