Forged In Burning Flames

You can do It

No Matter how Daunting the Feat

It might feel UNBEARABLE 

Death be Bitter Sweet


Keep in Mind if Flying

Your Landing be Secured

Gravity has No Mercy

It Clear from Newton's law


You can do It

It might be Crazy but it's True

If you actually Conceive It

It is POSSIBLE to do


Never STOP Dreaming

Despite what People Say

You Need to Plan Tomorrow

And What you'll Do Today


You can do It

Hearts Heal along the way

It may be UNFAIR at times

This the Challenge we must face 


Always be Conscientious 

What you Give comes Back to Pay

In Fires of FAITH and COURAGE

We're Forged in BURNING FLAMES


YOU CAN DO IT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Well done Arturo, congrats on POTW
Lindley Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 5:42 AM
If only this dark world did not place so many obstacles in peoples path, that blind them to following the path your poem correctly presents. Great poetry my friend, very inspiring and on the mark too. Great choice for POTW.. A fav-- a gem too..
Makama Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Refined and fine, I'm grateful because its beautiful, great lines with fire, connecting me like a wire, shows the glory of your hand and the power of your mind. An excellent piece my friend.
Michael Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Thank you Fumom...Good to hear from you...Love health and prosperity to you and yours
Mcdaid Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 7:15 AM
nicely penned beautifully painted piece i pray you have a blessed week arturo
Michael Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Good to see you Liam...All the best my friend...Thank you
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 11, 2019 at 12:25 PM
"What you give comes back to pay" this wonderful line holds all the truth we need be aware of Arturo. Excellent choice for POTW! Congratulations!
Poetry Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Thanks B
Bangalee Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 11:25 PM
COME, COME TO BE THE LIGHT OF SUN, NOT TO BURN BUT TO ENLIGHTEN THE WHOLE!
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Back with congrats on POTW, Arturo..a well deserved honor!
Adams Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Very positive poem...wonderful penning my friend, congrats on POTW
Warrior Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 6:46 PM
Congrats!! my friend on potw!! Arturo...well expressed my friend...^WW^ :o)
Gall Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Congratulations on POTW Arturo
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Yes, We CAN! Such a positive beautiful poetry! Congratulations on your POTW, Arturo! So pleased to read your Honoured work.. My warmest regards and blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Way to go! Congrats on POTW.
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 8:58 PM
Inspiring one, Arturo. YOu can DO It. and big congrats too on POtw. Wow!
Nicole Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 6:42 PM
"If you actually conceive it. It is possible to do. You can do it" Yes, you can. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Inspiring words from your heart. Nice seeing you get Poem of the Week. Congratulations Arturo. :) Brandy
La France Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Arturo, congratulations on POTW with this terrific write, quite the honor!
One Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Coming back to congrats you on potw
Kitchin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 2:49 PM
Arturo, congratulations on POTW with your encouraging poem!
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:14 AM
such inspiring line Arturo, congrats on POTW:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 7:41 AM
A very inspiring verse Arturo, congrats on POTW. Tom.
Labyrinth Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 7:57 AM
"In the fires of 'faith' and courage, We're forged in burning flames". Which is stronger, hope or faith?
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Faith is stronger, when what is hoped for happens hope is no more, faith is unending!
Michael Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Correct... This I completely agree...
Vangaveti Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 11:10 PM
"Always be conscientious What you give comes back to pay"- And here we call it Karma. I believe in it completely. A must read poem by everyone.
Michael Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Thank you Swetha... there're so many aspects to Karma...it could surely be a guide to good living...
Devonshire Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 12:50 PM
It's always a shame when we see people giving up on their dreams, but it happens often. If these people had a chance to read your poem, they might have the encouragement needed to fulfill their goals. Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem, Arturo! Hugs, Carolyn
Michael Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:56 AM
I would say...90 percent of the people lose it before they really dream it...It's sad... Thank you Carolyn...A big hug for you...
Perrin Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:00 AM
I adore this inspiring and encouraging poem :-) well done Arturo x
Michael Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Thank you Elaine...You do it...
Zacharias Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 11:08 PM
I love this poem, it lights the joy of courage and burns the heart into endurance. Wonderful!! The fire is good,it takes you outside of the inside comforts and back into the reality and heat of life. A consuming reflection.
Michael Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Correct...very clear your point of view...All the best Dawne
There Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Now, this is quite an encouraging piece. Words I could use to hear again in the future, so... a fave ~ thanks, Arturo <3
Michael Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Thank you Hello There...Glad you enjoyed it...
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