Emile Pinet Poet Quatrain

Forged As One

The intensity of love's
heat was gradual at first.
And then a shower of sparks,
spontaneously dispersed.

Fueling fledgling feelings,
flames burned an exquisite blue.
And slowly shifted scarlet,
as desire and passion grew.

My inhibitions melted,
into pools of liquid fire.
And, as temperatures climbed,
my hopes rose even higher.

Our souls melded together,
two, forever forged as one.
And the heat of our union,
rivaled the heat of the sun.

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Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 8:32 PM Hot stuff. "My inhibitions melted into pools of liquid fire." Well done, Emile. Emile Pinet March 7, 2018 at 9:00 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Richard Lamoureux June 23, 2015 at 7:49 AM This is a hot one Emile. Emile Pinet June 23, 2015 at 8:27 AM Thanks Richard. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen June 23, 2015 at 12:28 AM What a great and lovely poem, you penned it excellently........A.M. Emile Pinet June 23, 2015 at 8:26 AM Thanks for the visit Afolabi, I appreciate it. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2015 at 12:26 AM wow, this is one passionate write. That last line is a stunner!! Emile Pinet June 23, 2015 at 8:27 AM Thanks Andrea, I appreciate it. Emile.

Constance La France June 22, 2015 at 10:38 PM Emile, a beautifully written poem full of passion, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath . . . Emile Pinet June 23, 2015 at 8:28 AM Thanks Broken, I appreciate it. Emile.

Matthew Anish June 22, 2015 at 5:21 PM What a "hot" poem. I wrote "Rave On" for Debra Guzzi's contest. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Emile Pinet June 22, 2015 at 6:04 PM Thanks for the visit Matthew, I appreciate it. Emile.

Casarah Nance June 22, 2015 at 9:29 AM This was great! You sure do have a passionate poetic pen, and I am sure enjoying reading your sizzling lines! Emile Pinet June 22, 2015 at 11:37 AM Why thank you Casarah, I appreciate the feed back and support. Emile.