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The intensity of love's heat was gradual at first. And felt like pins and needles spontaneously dispersed. Fueling fledgling feelings, flames burned with a bluish hue. And slowly shifted scarlet as desire and passion grew. My inhibitions melted into pools of liquid fire. And as temperatures climbed, my hopes rose even higher. Two souls melded together; forever forged as one. And the heat of that union, rivaled the heat of the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/6/2018 8:32:00 PM
Hot stuff. "My inhibitions melted into pools of liquid fire." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 7:49:00 AM
This is a hot one Emile.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Richard. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 12:28:00 AM
What a great and lovely poem, you penned it excellently........A.M.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Afolabi, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 12:26:00 AM
wow, this is one passionate write. That last line is a stunner!!
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 10:38:00 PM
Emile, a beautifully written poem full of passion, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath . . .
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 5:21:00 PM
What a "hot" poem. I wrote "Rave On" for Debra Guzzi's contest. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/22/2015 6:04:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Matthew, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 9:29:00 AM
This was great! You sure do have a passionate poetic pen, and I am sure enjoying reading your sizzling lines!
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Date: 6/22/2015 11:37:00 AM
Why thank you Casarah, I appreciate the feed back and support. Emile.
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