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Forever's Goodbye

Today I'll give up on you because holding on, is just to hard to do. I always thought you and I we made a great team, but now is the time for goodbye. This sense of hopelessness it all just makes me sick, how could we have come to this? Its hard to have the strength to move on after all that we've been through, but the hope I once had is gone. I feel I've died a thousand times and my misery is all that is real, but still I tired to hide in the lies. My heart lies broken and hollow the pain that consumes me, is greater than anyone could ever know. So what is the point in you and me I guess noone will ever know, so you can just walk away and be free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2016 11:36:00 PM
MARTHA, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:01:00 AM
can feel the devastation,so sorry
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Martha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2010 7:29:00 PM
A wonderful write, great thoughts, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 11/4/2010 9:09:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its very creative theme... hope your time on Soup is special .. and fun... and u will check out the contest scene offered to members..good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:32:00 AM
Powerful thoughts you have expressed on the love that is to be abandoned
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