Forever?...Or Never?

i used to think
 that
 we were always gonna be in love
...but i was so naive
there isn't anything in this life
that's guaranteed
you take your chances
when
you let your heart lead
i wanted to keep on loving you
you let me down
when
you said some things that were untrue
so
i'm giving you up
because
there isn't enough love
in this 
world
to
change my mind
we're out of time
...the dream is over
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 23, 2010 at 2:41 PM
Take your chances, but choose them well. If it works out tomorrow, there's no farewell. The next day will be better, and your future will be swell. With no looking back, but only you can tell >> another gem Aneysa >> James
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February 15, 2010 at 5:14 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Aneysa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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